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WolfWTF

Haven't read it yet busy at work but is it Christmas? 10 days early THANK YOU. Btw i think you should pin the monthly dates of new chapters to the top easier to check when your fav fic comes out

Tonty

poor fool he think that the fire lord care for anything more than himself hashaha

Gilgamesh_069

How you made me sympathize with the unsympathetic is crazy. So, how long until we leave Ba Sing Se? Also good chapter

King230

Long Feng truly thinks that Ozai cares about his children that couldn’t be further from the truth he sees them as tools

Drinor

I’m glad you like this story. And sadly, you can only pin one post at a time to be at the top of the page, and the post about Collection and how to easily find the chapters and one shots is quite helpful and needed for new patrons to not be at the top.

Drinor

Well, in his defense, Long Feng, while what he’s doing is wrong, he still cares a lot for his family, so it simply never crosses his mind that the Fire Lord might not give one single f*ck about his children.

Drinor

I’m glad I was able to do a good job writing Long Feng’s backstory and why he thinks not fighting is a better idea. Book 2 is almost done. I believe we will reach Book 3 within 2 Chapters.

Drinor

Well, Long Feng, despite his flaws, cares for his family, so even he doesn’t think there can be someone as heartless as Ozai who doesn’t care about his family.

Erinnyes

Solid chapter, you did a good job making Long Feng's motivations make sense. His actions still aren't moral or rational, but I see how someone could get there. Nice work. 🙂

Tonty

yeah but i really think his thought process was uhh he is an assh*le like me but i care about family he must care too hahaha