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Loyalist

A good Holy Brother is a dead one Viserys is truly stupid You seriously expect good and fair council from Alicent Hightower of all people?!?!?!?!?

Drinor

Well, as pointed out in this chapter, he wants advice from different sources. That’s why he opens up to Alicent; he believes he can make better decisions if he is not listening to a single source.

Loyalist

That is fair, I am not speaking badly about the want to explore different sources, but his choice of said source He could have asked his grandmother, the dowager Queen, or Lyonel or any other member of the small council Instead he goes to the daughter of the man he is thinking about firing Love the story ❤️

TheWateringWizard

Just wanted to quickly point out: Viserys nodded as the two sauntered towards their chamber. "You are right, so what would you have me do?" he asked, looking down at Alicent. As they walked toward their chamber, Viserys nodded slowly, absorbing her words. "You’re right, as always. So, what would you have me do?" Viserys repeats himself

TheWateringWizard

Okay I’ll put it here, once again please do tell if it’s unwelcome. Also here: "Guards, take him to the black cells. Perhaps confinement will loosen his tongue," Viserys initially ordered I think you meant to write Otto. Sorry to be that guy but I thought giving some quick beta would be helpful. Tell me if it’s not welcome

TheWateringWizard

I love how much in control Alysanne is, made me laugh seeing the flabbergasted Viserys. At least he put Otto in his place! I always love seeing the Red Priest or Priestess tricking the bumbling Faith Militant. Those guys really are tying their own rope around their necks

Drinor

Alysanne is similar to Olenna, but she's much more ruthless. With what Kinvara has planned. The Faith Militants will soon butcher each other.

Eva Cole

I don't feel bad for the brothers of the faith right now. And honestly I'm disliking viscerys more and more