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The Dark Side of Magic Chapter 8 (Shadows of the Sith) (Patreon)

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2024-11-11 20:37:00
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2026-06
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UFezg7g75Pgkb63XpdL6NfuatdMODuNwREBgmfg151A/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Erinnyes

An absolutely excellent series of chapters. You've done a wonderful job keeping Harry believable as a mature 11 year old, but still an impulsive child prone to reckless decisions and short term reasoning. On the flip side, it's very easy to make young characters deeply annoying, but you've run the line between "implausibly mature" and "annoying kid" extremely well.

Ryan

You’ve done a great job with these drops - this will end up as the best Star Wars in Harry Potter fanfic

Ryan
>>155038773

There are some good Harry Potter in Star Wars ones, but most of the opposite just don’t hit

Erinnyes
>>155038773

There's some really good unfinished ones. "Still haven't found what I'm looking for" is amazing, but dead. 😢

Hakai

"No, we need someone to tell the teachers. Plus, you know more spells than I do – if something happens, you'll be more help to them than to me." What? Lol how does Susan know more spells than Harry, let alone any even close?

Drinor
>>155073486

That was a mistake on my part. Thank you for pointing it out. It was supposed to be Tonks instead of Susan, but then I changed it to Susan since Anna is her big sister in this story. I forgot to change that part of the dialogue.

Drinor
>>155029203

I’m happy to hear that. Harry is still 11 years old, but his life has changed, and sometimes, he is more mature than he should have been.

Ryan
>>155038773

Yeah, but that's HP in Star Wars, this is Star Wars in HP - harder to do.

Ryan
>>155038773

@Drinor - The best are: Magic of the Force (long as hell and ongoing), Still haven't found what I'm looking for, Same Song Different Verse (my favorite), The Battles Within

TheWateringWizard
>>155038773

In All Things Balance is fantastic. It has a big sequel, IATB: the Rise, that is sadly unfinished and will probably never be. Totally worth the read though

daniel kim hansen

Oh man that's really love this one it's so comedy lazed I've been laughing my ass off great work man

Cody

This story is incredible so far although I do wonder what that other pressence is that Anakin felt.