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Anthony Rodriguez

I'm surprised you changed Toph's parents to be sycophantic villains. Then again, they did hire people to abduct their daughter and force her to come home.

Drinor

Not exactly. Toph says that her parents might inform the Fire Nation soldiers that she is here with Naruto, but Toph just thinks that might happen. As for her parents, let’s say things won’t be as simple as they were in Cannon.

Anthony Rodriguez

It never was with her parents. Especially with her dad after reading the comics.

William Kwok

I enjoyed this chapter too! Both parts set up the two massive respective battles! Yeah BA Sing Sae will be having a massive wake up call soon.

Daniel Howell

Great chapter. I love the suspense of not know what is going to happen next.

Drinor

Well, Aang is stepping the fuck up and is almost ready to take the role of The Avatar.