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Click the LINK Below to read the One Shot

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14xuhZg0pCOqTkgKjwrn6OqN8o-s5Y-fhXJ9Xz4cMdxU/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

roland octavius

You can’t just leave me on a cliffhanger like this man 😭

Ryan

This one could use more

Trevor macDonald

So good hope you continue it with at least one more chapter

Daeron Targaryen

I was so excited and then you had to use the Cannibal 😭 he’s so boring why not any other dragon, why not Balerion.

Drinor

I thought the same, it’s a very good idea, that I might decide to write…after I complete at least 5 of my stories.

Drinor

If it wins in the next GoT Poll, it might get one more chapter.

Drinor

Cannibal was barely in the One Shot. I just wanted him to have a dragon and choose that one, but now that I think about it. Balerion could have been a better choice.

Daeron Targaryen

Yes make it Balerion then as I suspect this will turn into more chapters.

Daeron Targaryen

Though I do wish Jon didn’t have silver hair then he’s not Jon, as for the Baratheon girl she would most likely be tortured and sent to the silent sisters.

Drinor

Both Jaehaerys and Alysanne have silver hair. It wouldn’t make sense for Jon to have dark hair.

TheWateringWizard

Loved it!! I really hope to see a second chapter for this story appear in a poll.

TheWateringWizard

You have ideas for a longer story from this one shot ? That’d be great to read

Drinor

I'm happy to read this Comment

GrouchyGritic

Another amazing work! As I said before I really love when fics give the girls who are screwed over a happy life. And I’m glad he’s mad at Alysanne too she gets too much slack from fans she is just as bad ( a better queen then her husband was a king as we saw she had to force him to help subjects) but a really flawed mother. Seriously dumbest match ever not a stark but an old manderly? They’re so loyal to starks you would get acess to their ships through stark marriage! They just didn’t understand their kids

GrouchyGritic

Also I know people think cannibal is op but I honestly don’t think so. He’s never fought an adult dragon or fought in wars , he would take a lot of time to train etc etc hell it would also proablly cause rider to get a bad reputation. The biggest boon of cannibal is his size thats it ( and I love him 🤣)

TheWateringWizard

Totally agree with your take on Alysanne. Jae was such a cunt at times that people kinda forgot that Alysanne wasn’t really perfect either. And I also love seeing characters who had terrible life get a happy one instead. The power of fanfics I guess. I’d love to see a one shot or a short story with Gael too. Such a sad and tragic life she had

GrouchyGritic

I swear either targ women are cursed or there really is a conspiracy because something always happened. Like how tf do these girls get away from guards to be hurt? Look at Aelora that was sus af