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Ironeggward

Loved it. Loved how you had Harry handle all that came up during the ball. Great introduction of Fleur too. Can't wait for the next three chapters for this month.

TheslayerofZ

Can't wait for the next chapter it was very good is the princess going to be part of the personal relations later or is she just going to be a good friend of Harry's that actually brings up a good point of how they would do the Dead. because in real life the male carries the baby

Erinnyes

Just a lovely chapter, through and through. Great character work, wonderful setting, didn't linger longer than it needed to anywhere while not feeling rushed. Fleur is going to get quite the interrogation from Gabrielle later. :D

Drinor

Gabriella is the biggest Fleur/Harry shipper.

Drinor

This Fleur is someone who is good at politics. She was intrigued by Harry since he was able to do so much already despite just passing his first year, but Harry took her by surprise since she had expected someone she should be wary of.

Drinor

I'm really not sure about the Princess. I think she will remain a good friend.

Mauricio Sanchez

10/10, Harry is developing influence in France and Britain, especially when Fudge turns against him and prove Sirius innocence

J T

So is this a hint that the tournament in fourth year is going to be held in France?That would a great change up. Overall excellent chapter!!!!

Drinor

Harry will develop even more influence, especially with what I have planned for the second year.

Drinor

No, the Tournament will still be held mainly in Hogwarts, but let's not do spoilers for now.

J T

Neat I’m fine whatever route you take. I am enjoying the ride!

Jsk32

too bad. i can easily see fleur being a fl making this basically unreadable for me. as much as i enjoy the story it almost makes me feel like my time was wasted reading this far.

Kuronokishi

Beautiful chapter!! Harry is a lady killer :-))) Barely 11, and already captivating hearts of stunning French Veela!!! Absolutely love this romantic development.