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Anthony Rodriguez

I wonder if this will convince Kakashi to up their training.

William Kwok

I it Kakashi highly suspecting that Naruto is actually Naruto his sensei son., I feel that next chapter (or next time we get Konoha scenes) will have the Leaf freak out to get ‘their’ Jinchuuriki for various reasons. Aka I feel things will hit the fan soon.

Drinor

Especially for Sakura.

Drinor

Hiruzen, in this story, won't be as clueless as he was in Canon. I will try to make him a more grey character rather than just a Hokage who allows people to walk over him like he is a stone.