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Zeldris

The pulsing of Luffy's mark worry me, I wonder if it's Imu or Shamrock listening on. Also I wonder if the voice Nami heard is her fruit.

Ryusui23

Good chapter as always, can’t wait till next month for the next chapter

Geovanni Otero

There has to be a way to get rid of that mark, and world government agents better start digging their graves

Zeldris

You're probably right. Yeah with his powerup Luffy will have an easier time wiping them out.

MAEGHT Maxime

Holy shit did Nami fruit just talk to her ? Well it look like Ussop wont be apart of the attack crew unless sniper king come around. Make my word Luffy will make Enies Lobby disappeared by himself.

Leroy

Yessir great chapter author

Drinor

Nami heard her Devil Fruit, but more of her situation will be explained later. Luffy's mark and it's purpose, that will take some time until is explained.

Drinor

I'm really happy you enjoyed the chapter.

Drinor

Usopp won't be part of the attack. Nami's Devil Fruit is the Guardian of the Sun.

Zeldris

Looking forward to it.

Palerider6660

I find myself upset. This is clearly how we're getting Yamato on the crew which make me happy. At the same time Enis Lobby and CP9 raise my blood pressure. I genuinely hope that this ends well and no more god level bullshit enemies show up. Ussop made his choice and now he must lie in it. Please wrap this ark up soon Drinor all this angst is getting to me.

Hayden evans

I hope you realise the story is already ruined just kill luffy off and get it done with

Jeremie

I don't think Luffy will do shit as he's now Imu's bitch and the author wants him to be weak as fuck so he probably won't be able to touch CP9 and will get his ass handed to him easily especially since he barely bothers using Haki

Jeremie

I think you're right BUT there could be some saving this story after all. I unfortunately doubt the author shares my view though as I'd have Luffy marked but then have Law remove it

Jeremie

It's going to end up with Luffy getting steamrolled by CP9 like he's their bitch since the author seems to build Luffy up as being strong and then immediately tearing him apart like he's a little kid despite the fact he's quite proficient in Haki and CP9 SHOULD stand no chance against him at this point since not only is he supposed to be strong but they have no real understanding of Haki