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Victory For The People

Ya have it say miss frigg, when it's Mrs Figg, unless it's a different person entirely? But ya referenced cats so I assumed.

HP81

This fic is really intriguing! Can’t wait to see the next chapter

Brian Jordan

I am not accusing the author of Ron bashing - the incident was utterly canon - but I see Mr. Weasley learning a very painful practical lesson in how to alienate people who could be valuable allies and why it is a very Bad Idea. I just hope Ms. Granger survives his lesson. A team of first years with normal school training brooms and limited experience versus a very competent team of upperclassmen . For everyone's sake, I hope this training exercise doesn't last the whole hour.

Cody

Loved the chapter and I hope poor Hermione is alright since Harry didn't try to comfort her this time around. It would make me sad if she ended up dead because of Ron due to the troll.

Jas

Can't wait for the next chapter

Drinor

It's Miss Frigg, but I made a mistake

Drinor

There will be no bashing in this story.

Hadrian v.E.

Some portion of the story so far leans too much of into the cringe trope of little kids over analysing every single decision tree doing a CBA. That's beyond unrealistic. While Weasley is a loser, he's right with respect to Hermione's overzealous attempts teaching. Canon Hermione is probably one of the most socially intelligent WW characters, yet both her and this version her behaves socially retardedly. If someone rejects your offer to help, especially when you've no obligation to do so, just stop.

Justin

Damn I read through this faster than I wanted. Really enjoying it

Kuronokishi

I wonder if Harry saves Hermione in this timeline. Maybe, snakes will alert him. It is not evening yet. I hope he will save Hermione in this timeline as well.