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Erinnyes

Wonderful chapter. Last paragraph aside, it’s one of the happiest things I’ve read in months.

Brian Jordan

The nicest part, oddly, was that Daphne answered Harry's question. An odd observation considering I was quite happy with the entire chapter but it feels true. I was also much amused at Hermione's jealousy, including her refusal to admit it (perhaps even to herself). I'm mildly worried about Itisa's sudden interest in Astoria, if only because it suggests certain things about our favorite nundu's relationship with Harry but this seems to have made Astoria happy and that is not a bad thing. In many ways this feels like a palate cleansing chapter before events start rushing forward again but there's nothing wrong with that at all. I look forward to whatever comes next. Thank you.