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Hello everyone. I’m happy to publish a New Chapter of A Nundu for A Pet, and Like the Chapter if you Enjoyed it.

I want to give a Special shout-out to Stokayokavic for becoming a Creator Patron. As one, they can choose one Story to be updated four extra times every month. The Story he chose is Two Chapters for The Hearts of Two Champions and Two Chapters for A Nundu for A Pet.

Click the LINK Below to Read the Chapter

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gJet52b_nLZHMOoZjVxo-xuom2GoZYCaBIRaUr2Mb1Y/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Stephen Alworth

You didn’t really answer why each academy has spoken about centuries of innovation and building, which seem completely unaffected by WW2, whereas Britain’s own school has shown no innovation since the Middle Ages and now have to inflate Voldemort’s casualties,something that does not explain the lack of innovation in the preceding centuries, to somehow account for the lack of any changes since like the 11th century. I mean Voldemort was only about a decade ago. Unless there was some unfathomable destruction of property and knowledge that everyone is keeping secret both in Britain and abroad there has been zero reason given why Every. Single. Other. Country has showcased feats that appear cosmic in comparison to Hogwarts. I mean. One of these schools (Italy) was literally a series of flying castles. At this point Harry is only staying at Hogwarts for his friends (a reason that any real friend would hate him for giving) and some weird insistence that leaving Britain would harm his independence. Something that is shown to be false because Britain is constantly interfering with his work whereas other countries are constantly trying to help him free of exploitation. I like the idea of exploring the magical world beyond Britain but I feel this stories has been trying to continuously one up itself with the spectacle presented by each subsequent school. Something that isn’t necessary because the unique cultures and their expressions should have been interesting enough. Sorry for the essay but this has been, in my eyes, a continuously compounding issue with this story.

Kuronokishi

Wow! Never expected such beautiful magical Russia. The mythical city of Kitezh.

Kuronokishi

Harry seriously needs to take inheritance test. He will need work hard to rebuild magical Britain. :-)))