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Keep up the good work

Brian Jordan

Long comment warning. Despite his efforts, Mr. Potter now has, if not a friend, an ally in Hermione Granger. Better, he's offered her valuable advice which she is apparently following some of (at least). The fact that Ron Weasley has no idea what he might have set in motion matters little . If and how this will cost him will be determined in due course. (This is not a beat on Ron post. He may yet redeem himself. He may also thoroughly condemn himself. We'll find out, though his current actions do not bode well for him.) Happily, I was wrong and we did not miss the quidditch game. Fred and George Weasley are not acting maliciously; they simply play hardball and have no reason to think others won't return the favor in due course. Professor Snape remains Professor Snape, for good and ill. Does he intend to have Harry serve detention after the game? If so, does he realize how small he is making himself seem? Does he care? Thank you for your attention and the new chapter. I look forward to the next chapter with great interest and anticipation.