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Robert Hernandez

Nice what's Jon's name going be named in this one

MAEGHT Maxime

Happy birthday my guess is name is Daemon , what would be the pairing in this story ?

Abyss

Thanks for the chapter! Couple of suggestions. One mistake you made was that you said Lyarra was betrothed to Brandon, not Rickard. Another suggestion for Jon’s Targ name would be Aeron. Pretty much it, I hope this gets updates soon.

TheDarkPrince

I had read a fanfic that was similar to this a long time ago but they abandoned the story. Can't wait for you to begin posting this! With Lyarra alive, Catelyn will find herself severely outmatched. I'm looking forward to it! As for his Targaryen name, I like the idea of having something completely new to mark the beginning of a new era for the house of the dragon, whilst also incorporating his northern name. So I like the name Jaeron. When will the first chapter be? And do you plan on having regular time jumps or will it be a slow burner to begin with?

Gabe Sarti

Hopefully, this story won’t be abandoned like the other stories I have seen with this plot line. Though I do have extreme faith in you!!! And Happy Birthday. Also any idea what the pairing will be for this story?

FangRu

Great premise. I love unique personality Jon. As for Targ name well how about Aegor? Power hungry as conqueror and ruthless as Maegor.

Gamer_Jaystewart

Great Teaser and Happy Birthday! Also for names I know some of them get used a Lot but maybe Aemon Targaryen, Jacaerys Targaryen or even Duncan Targaryen after his Great Great Uncle and Duncan the Tall

george zuki

I low key cried and this is amazing

george zuki

Also happy birthday 🎉🎁🎂 , we should do a zoom or twitch discord sit down with everyone to do so Thank you for all of the work you do

Zeldris

Happy Birthday, for his Targ name I would suggest Aemon

Ymere

Happy Birthday, thanks for the present. As everyone said this looks great. Love a story with Lyarra still alive to give Jon some care. I agree with an above reader. I like Aegor for his Targaryen name. I liked his reasoning too. Powerful and driven as the Conqueror and as Ruthless as Maegor.

PurportedGrey

Happy birthday, and what a great premise! I can't wait to see he how this story pans out and evolves like many of your other great stories!

Daeron Targaryen

Happy birthday my friend and I hope Jon is more akin to Henry V charming, charismatic but willing to die for his friends.

OwnedOne

Happy birthday. Good teaser. Are you able to reveal what the possible pairing(s?) for this are or would that be too much of a spoiler ?

DB#05

Happy birthday 🥳🎉🎂🥳 great story

thunderforth rc

Happy birthday and wish you all the best. The teaser was well made I love that you let lyarra live that way He will have someone to look after him . I think it would be nice for his name to be Aemon, as every aegon should have an aemon . Or maybe Rhaengon a mix of his brother and sister. A suggestion by the way will you be having jon rediscover how to reforge valiryan steel and valiryan black rock making .

Abdoulaye Sarr

Happy Freaking Birthday Drinor! I wish you many more and i can’t wait to keep reading your stories!

travis btmb

I like the concept overall I like him being cunning and ruthless when necessary but I just can't see Jon being power hungry

Drinor

I asked at the end of the chapter what you all think his name should be.

Drinor

Thank You Daemon is a good suggestion. As for the pairing, it will be revealed when the story comes out.

Drinor

That other story inspires this story. Sadly, that story hasn’t been updated for over two years. Catelyn is a fish trying to fight a Wolf. I don’t think that’s a good idea. 😀 I like the suggestion. As for the first chapter, I think after Kissed by Sun is finished. This story won’t be as slow burn as the others, while I won’t rush it. The story will move faster this time.

Drinor

I won’t abandon it, don’t worry about it. Thank You, I hope you have a great day. More about the pairing will be revealed when the first chapter comes out.

Drinor

I love the idea of Lyarra being alive; it is a very interesting concept. Jon, in this story, will be a beast but also extremely cunning and smart. I like the suggestion for the name, too.

Drinor

Thank You. I have already planned many of the main plot points of this story: this Jon will be a Beast, and not because of the Dragon he will eventually have.

Drinor

Jon will be very charming, charismatic, intelligent, and quite ruthless, and I mean really ruthless. As a big fan of History, for this story, I have drawn inspiration from several known war strategists and kings.

Drinor

Thank You. I’m glad you like it. As for pairing, it will be revealed more when the first chapter comes out.

Drinor

Thank You. I hope you have a good day. Jon Snow, in this story, is like a mix of Aegon, Maegor, and Tywin, but he’s also very cunning. He will achieve quite a Lot. Lyarra will be like the Guardian of Jon. She will raise him like she was his mother.

Drinor

This Jon will be raised differently. It will make sense as the story goes on.

Drinor

Yes, is an inspiration for this story. Sadly, the other story hasn’t been updated for over two years now.

Moi MT

Su nombre podría ser Aemon ,daeron ,baelon o baelor o incluso Daemon o jaherys

Speedy

WTF! This teaser is amazing, the plot has great potential.

Sean P

This story has my so excited. What a great idea for new point of view

Tyus

If Jon is going to be cunning, ruthless and charismatic. There’s only one name that would perfectly fit him. Daemon Targaryen

Leorichs

That was really great teaser, I have read a story that is similar to this premise but I think it is abandoned. I have high hopes for this you always write good stories so I can't wait. I hope one of the pairing for Jon is Daenery. Jon and Daenery are my favorite GRRM character and you always deliver with that pairing.

Drinor

Daenerys will be one of the pairings. This story takes inspiration from that one. Sadly, the other one hasn’t been updated in two years.

Winter

Greetings happy belated i hope that with lyarra alive he will be as the traits you mentioned hungry ruthless cunning and smart daemon targaryen would fit perfectly you already teased one pairing i would hope he has some fun and maybe added pairings

Nacy Boudreaux

I want to see how this story develops.

Drinor

He will have all the traits promised. Daemon is a good suggestion for him. Jon will have a Lot of fun, that’s for sure.

Speedy

Great you started this story, cannot wait for next chapters... For name: Vinys or Taelarys?

Franklin Perez

Maegor Or jaehaerys those are never used it usually Aemon or aegon

Eva Cole

I'm loving this! I'm glad Jon will have someone in his corner

Tk Oni

This is incredible, you never fail to write a master piece, thank you for being a fan creator. 😊