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Angel

Big harem Susan, Daphne, Luna, hermione, fluer, nym

TheslayerofZ

Not how I thought you would introduce Ted to the nudu but good none the less thanks for the chapter

Ironcoil

Gotta love the knee jerk reactions, you’d think someone with a muggle background would assess the situation before attacking a creature that a dozen wizards could not stop. You’ve really shown how cerebral challenged wizards become after a Hogwarts education. Another amazing chapter and look forward to seeing how they get themselves out of this mess!

MAEGHT Maxime

Since Harry will be more powerful than in canon isita will even more useful during the war and for me a big harem

Erinnyes

Small, big harems never have enough time to actually make it feel like he's in a genuine relationship with each of them, and Itisa already (correctly!) takes up a lot of screen time.

Palerider6660

I say big harem. Also Ted was exceptionally fucking stupid here. He sees a Nundu which is a known wizard killer and is said to require 100 wizards to kill (of which about 40 will typically be killed in the battle) and he thinks lobbing spells in an otherwise calm situation is the correct choice. Kinda disappointing.

Drinor

A Nundu is very powerful; his daughter was there, so he did something without thinking first. And as Andromeda states later, as far as everyone knows, Nundus are not animals that can be tamed, so the thought that perhaps the Nundu wouldn’t attack didn’t even cross his mind. After arriving at his home, he realizes he should not have attacked Itisa.

Drinor

The next Chapter will have a more calm, but at the same time terrifying meeting with Itisa.

Drinor

I’m glad you liked it. As far as Ted knew, Nundus cannot be tamed, and are walking Nukes. So he attacked.

Palerider6660

Hindsight is an asshole lol. Harry is probably going to have difficulty trusting any magical after this. Here's hoping Dumbledore and McGonagall stay more level headed.

Shannon Smacher

big harem please. But no more then 6. After that it becomes too much.

Legacy

Small harem 2-3 seems like enough I would say stick with Daphne and fleur maybe an oc to make 3

Frodran

Small, big ones suck, the members never get any real time, small with Luna, and either Daphne or Astoria or Lilith Moon

Howie60

Big harem

AJ

I'd settle on 4 girls

Robert

Dumbledore already appears to be the Greater Good type in this story, not listening to Ms. Figg about Harry’s mistreatment

Robert

Attacking a walking Nuke seems counter intuitive especially when it was in a small feline form - that should have at least signified there wasn’t an immediate threat - guess it’s hard to think fast rationally in that type of situation but it went as bad as it possibly could have without Itisa killing Ted or Nym. Hope this doesn’t drag out since it’s only once a month updated 😭

Robert

Re Harem: Luna definitely fits in this story as either a best friend or partner for Harry - I can see her immediately going up to Itisa and them forming a bond too. Like Daphne as well with Slytherin being his house, they can become close easier in this story. I don’t think Hermione fits in this story as a partner - without the sorting they aren’t going to be able to realistically develop the same bond they had in Force of Magic - the romantic pairings should feel somewhat realistic - like Tonks and Hermione in FoM feel perfectly formed in how they have come together so far. Daphne and Luna 100% feel like they could be similar. An interesting OC idea could be a grandaughter of Newt Scamander that he meets soon - if Dumbledore does get involved he would certainly call Newt in to see about the Bond between Harry and Itisa. Newt had a Nundu in his suitcase in the first movie that he could approach so that might work? Just a couple thoughts Thanks for the update, can’t wait to see what’s next

yan boul

good chapter and big harem

Andrew

Big harem

Platyperry

Small harem to focus on plot pls

TheWateringWizard

Small harem. Why does Ted have a wand? Isn’t he a muggle ? Edit: never mind no, he’s muggleborn my bad

J T

Small Harem.

Ernest Rivers

Small Harem makes more sense to me. If I had to pick who though, I'd go with my favorites: Hermione, Daphne and Fleur.

Fernando Russi Oliveira

Harém de 3: Hermione Granger, Susam Bones, Daphne greengrass, mais garotas fica difícil de aguentar kkkkkk

maxime bégin

Big harem : Fleur, Daphne, Nymphadora, Parvati Patil, Padma Patil, Susan

Ant Franklin

Small, Hermione Granger, Daphne Greengrass, Padma Patil

Eva Cole

They won't react well if they try and take her away again. He'll never want to be their hero

SSs34TheElf

Personally, I’d say small Harem is nicer. I’d say Daphne, Luna and Fleur.

Delta105

Big: Hermione, Daphne, Padma, Fleur, Nymphadora, and Cho

Kaleth_05

Friend, I only know of one case in which a harem worked wonderfully, and although I don't like the subject, If you think you can make one without spoiling the story, then you are welcome, although small would be much better.

Tamsus Karalius

I'd say a big one on the smaller side, so 4 girls.

madmax176

Small. Include luna