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Viserra

Seventh Moon, 98 AC

“Dracarys!” Viserra commanded as Dreamfyre dived. Instantly, a column of blue flames emerged from her maw. A rain of fiery death pouring from the sky. Within minutes, the enemy fleet had been reduced to smoldering planks and cinders burning on the sea.

Fools, Viserra thought. The Ghiscari had forgotten the might of dragons and had thought to defy them yet again. She looked back to her fleet which now sailed north for Velos completely unopposed. Corlys must be disappointed that his fancy new wildfire flamethrowers were not seeing any use, but why have flamethrowers on your ships when you had a dragon in the sky?

Their journey from Tyrosh had taken them five months, and when they had rounded the Doom and arrived in the Gulf of Grief, they had been confronted by a massive fleet flying banners and standards Viserra had recognized to be from the Slaver Cities of Astapor, Yunkai, Meereen, and New Ghis. The very same that had sacked Velos all those years ago.

The coming of House Velaryon was well known in Essos. Word had spread quickly and Slaver’s Bay had been aware of their approach months in advance due to how far the distance was. Not that that foreknowledge would save them from their wrath.

Following their plan, Viserra flew over the Velaryon Fleet as it sailed for the ruins of Velos. The water was a blue so deep it appeared to be almost black, and as they approached the southern shores, it changed to be a shimmering blue turquoise. The beaches near Velos were full of pale sands that reminded Viserra of Driftmark.

When they finally arrived, Viserra immediately understood why her husband had taken Velos’ loss so personally. She had not seen the outpost before its destruction, but she had heard of his descriptions of it. In her mind’s eye, a part of her expected to see the port they had rebuilt, the inns and bazaars that had sprouted up, the ships that had filled the harbor. A modest but prosperous town that Corlys had spent years building up as a waystation during his voyage. Years’ worth of work, destroyed by the greed of slavers. Only charred ruins and rubble remained now.

At her command, Dreamfyre landed gracefully in a ruined courtyard shortly before the Tide Guard rushed in. Corlys and Aurane walked into the courtyard soon after that and they stopped in front of the charred ruins of a house. Before it was burnt, Viserra might have called it a manse, if a modest one. It had clearly been larger than all the other buildings surrounding the courtyard.

She walked up to her husband and goodbrother. “Anything particularly important about this house?”

“This was our cousin’s house, before the sack. Lucerys… he followed me on many of my voyages back in the day. After the sixth, Velos had sprouted up into a small but increasingly prosperous town. It needed a steward. Lucerys volunteered to be its governor, and I gave him the position gladly, because I trusted him. It led him to his death,” Corlys explained.

“It wasn’t your fault alright?” Viserra said grabbing his hand gently. “The slavers did this. Ghiscari filth killed your cousin and everyone else here. We will avenge them now.”

Perhaps weary of the heavy discussion, Aurane changed the topic. “The slavers are more foolish than I thought. We expected to face a garrison when we landed, but the island appears to be devoid of any men.”

“More’s the pity,” Viserra said darkly. “Dreamfyre would have enjoyed roasting them all.”

“It’s better this way. We can save the roasting for when we move to the mainland in a few days. In the meantime, the Isle of Cedars is the perfect base for our men to rest after the long journey and to restock our provisions,” Corlys said.

“When we first arrived here, the island’s animals had no fear of men and would approach us eagerly. Including wild boars and pigs. We filled our larders up with salted pork, smoked ham, and bacon,” Corlys explained as they walked.

“The men would enjoy those I’m sure,” Viserra said.

“They’d enjoy the monkeys less. Damnable pests infested Velos back then, and they’d come to the ships as well, making a nuisance of themselves stealing food and swinging between spars,” Aurane said.

“There were rumors of ghosts and horrors in Velos when we first came here years ago as well. Those stories came to an end eventually as we rebuilt the city, but with it having fallen back into ruin, perhaps those ghosts have returned?” Corlys said with a mischievous glint in his eyes.

“Nice try Corlys,” Viserra shook her head unamused. “Ghosts mean nothing to a dragonrider.”

“Even dragons might find themselves scared sometimes,” Corlys warned with a faraway look in his eyes.

That night, they feasted on wild boar, roasted with spices and curry to cut away the gaminess of the meat. There was in fact, no horrors or ghosts, though that had not stopped Viserra from having Dreamfyre rest herself right outside the house Corlys and her had claimed for themselves.

One of the few with an intact roof, the Tide Guard had secured it for them and had moved many of their things from their quarters on the Sea Snake to it for them, including their bed. Viserra slept soundly that night, on solid ground for the first time in months, and if Corlys had noticed her slight wariness of the supposed horrors, he did not comment on it.

Over the following days, their scout parties pushed further north into the interior of the island, hunting pigs and collecting mushrooms, flowers, seeds, and other edible foodstuffs to restock their provisions. After they’d spent a week foraging and hunting, it was decided that they had sufficiently restocked their supplies and rested their men.

Aurane was left in charge of a large garrison to hold Velos against any surprise attack and start work on clearing the rubble for the eventual rebuilding of the outpost. Scout parties were to continue foraging, hunting, and exploring in the interior as well. The waters around the island were also rich in fish, and many of the ships left behind were put to work fishing when not on patrol duty. If their plans for the Isle of Cedars were to see fruition, they needed to have food and shelter aplenty.

Viserra and Corlys on the other hand, led the bulk of the fleet to their first target. The city of Astapor was the closest of the Slaver Cities to the Isle of Cedars. It was about a week’s sailing before they reached the city.

Viserra had taken to the sky as they had approached the city, and she looked over it from above. The bay shore was dominated by red pyramids, each with great steps, and the largest of which was four hundred feet high, not that such heights mattered to a dragon. The city’s walls were red, but the bricks were crumbling and red dust blew all over the city. She remembered an old rhyme. Bricks and blood built Astapor, and bricks and blood her people.

Their coming had clearly been expected. The city’s famed Unsullied manned the crumbling walls and gates. Had it not been for Dreamfyre, Astapor would be difficult to take indeed for House Velaryon. As it was however, Viserra had to resist the urge to simply order Dreamfyre to lay waste to the entire city. It was so tempting; it would be so easy. But it would be so wasteful as well.

Viserra landed Dreamfyre out of range of Astapor’s archers, where the Tide Guard had set up a pavilion for Corlys and her. She wiped her brow, feeling her sweat drip from her body. The hot Astapori sun was unforgiving, and the heat was brutal.

It was not long before an Astapori delegation arrived to negotiate with them. A modest company of Unsullied lead many manacled in chains and several chests of gold. At their head were three Astapori Masters. The company came flying a banner of truce, so the Tide Guard begrudgingly let them pass.

“Greetings Your Excellency, Princess Viserra. It is an honor to meet the Archon of Tyrosh and his consort, the rider of the great dragon,” the head of the delegation said, speaking in High Valyrian with a filthy Ghiscari growl that made Viserra cringe to hear how her mother tongue was butchered. “I am Krazdan ro Akhaz, one of the Good Masters of Astapor.”

“And what have you come here for Akhaz?” Her husband replied in proper, perfect High Valyrian.

“Only to say that, we need not be adversaries Your Excellency. Astapor has a gift for the House of Velaryon. Chained behind me in manacles, is the captain of every ship that led the assault on Velos all those years ago. They were motivated by greed, and acted without the Good Masters’ authorization. There is also a great gift of gold, incense, and other precious luxuries, as the token of our goodwill and the compensation of Astapor for the unfortunate events at Velos.”

What nonsense, Viserra thought, but she said nothing out loud.

“I’m afraid Akhaz, that even if we were to believe that you and your fellow Good Masters had no part in the attack on Velos, this compensation is paltry for the damages done to Velos. I would have my rightful compensation for the death of my cousin and many of our people.”

Akhaz bowed. “Of course Your Excellency. What is it that you would ask of the Good Masters of Astapor?”

“I accept all the gifts that you have offered me, but furthermore I would have all of your famed Unsullied, both fully trained as well as the uncut boys and those whose training is not yet complete. I intend to sack Yunkai and Meereen, and I would have more soldiers with which to do this. Unlike esteemed Astapor which has graciously agreed to negotiate with us and have given us these gifts in a show of good faith, I am quite certain the Wise Masters of Yunkai and the Great Masters of Meereen are guilty.”

“Certainly they are Excellency,” Akhaz said, with a malicious greed in his eyes at the thought of Astapor’s chief rivals being destroyed, allowing the declining city to monopolize the slave trade in the bay.

A worried expression filled his face then. “However, I am left uncertain about this compensation you ask for. The Unsullied are Astapor’s chief export, our pride and wealth. Without them we are left defenseless, and without our profit. It is not cheap to train Unsullied, and you desire the uncut and untrained as well? We cannot have green and raw boys sullying the reputation of our Unsullied.”

Viserra shook her head. “Come now Good Master, we all know that Astapor will profit greatly from Yunkai and Meereen’s downfall, Unsullied or no. And perhaps you misunderstand, this is not a request.” At her words, Dreamfyre moved over to them and breathed hot air on the Good Master.

Akhaz looked terrified. “I… I cannot speak for all of my fellow Good Masters in this. Please allow me some time to convince them of the wisdom of accepting.”

“Of course,” Corlys said magnanimously. “You have one day Good Master.”

Akhaz nodded before he turned to leave. The Unsullied made to retrieve the chests of gold and other goods and lead the chained prisoners back. The Tide Guard made to stop them but the resolute and fearless Unsullied only halted when Dreamfyre growled at them, making them all freeze in terror. Viserra was amused. Not even the infamously harsh training of the Unsullied could break the fear of dragons it seemed.

“Leave them,” Corlys ordered. “They are gifts are they not?”

Akhaz nodded again, almost pissing his trousers, before he all but ran from the pavilion back to the city, his Unsullied in tow.

After a brief and sharp interrogation in which they concluded that the prisoners were in fact the same men who had led the assault on Velos all those years ago, Corlys ordered their soldiers to line them all up within open view of the city and at Viserra’s command, Dreamfyre slowly roasted and ate each and every one of them.

By noon the next morning, Akhaz had returned. Behind him marched a massive army of Unsullied in perfect formation, uncaring of the hot midday sun above them. Behind the Unsullied lagged those whose training was not yet complete, and their discipline was notably much weaker.

Akhaz approached them and handed Corlys a whip. “The Good Masters have agreed to your demands. All we ask is that you make for Yunkai as soon as possible and trouble us no longer. We would have peace with House Velaryon.”

Corlys said nothing to Akhaz but accepted the whip. He marched forward and barked orders at the Unsullied formation, all of whom followed perfectly, while their less trained brethren struggled to withstand the heat of the sun as they moved.

Satisfied with the results, Corlys gave the next order. “Unsullied, I and House Velaryon have come to free the slaves of Astapor! This is my command! Fight alongside those who bear the banner of the Seahorse! Sack Astapor! Kill every master and take their wealth and bring it to us! Break the chains of every slave, but harm no women or children younger than three and ten!”

At that, Viserra made for Dreamfyre. They would have to break the gates of the city and clear a path for the Unsullied and the Velaryon Army to have unhindered access to sack the city.

Akhaz looked horrified. “This was not what we agreed Velaryon!”

Her husband looked toward him. “You are mistaken Akhaz. I never agreed to anything. Only you did.”

Infuriated, Akhaz drew a dagger and charged to stab Corlys, but the Tide Guard put him down before he got anywhere close to their lord.

With her husband safe, Viserra mounted Dreamfyre and outpaced the marching Unsullied and Velaryon Army for the city. At her command, her dragon blew open the gates of Astapor and they laid waste to all the defenders on the walls and in front of the gate, slaying any soldiers and sellswords that remained.

With the path cleared and the gates broken, the Velaryon Army and the Unsullied moved into the city and sacked it. Everything of value was taken, even those that were nailed down. Gold, silver, gems, silks, spices, and more luxuries and goods of great value. They took all the foodstuffs and stocks as well.

Astapor was smaller than Tyrosh, but it was a large city nonetheless. It took three days for their sack of the city to be complete. The evidence of their work was clear. Astapor the Red City was running red with blood. The blood of slavers, but also of the innocents slaughtered in the chaos. Not every freeborn person in that city had been a slaver after all, and they would suffer greatly from what they had done to it. But the world was cruel, and Viserra could not bring herself to care too much. It was not her duty or responsibility to care for these Ghiscari strangers.

Viserra stood with Corlys on the plain in front of the city, watching Astapor burn. The Unsullied had gathered in the plain in front of the broken city gates, with many of the freed slaves having come out as well, leaving the freeborn to weep and grind their teeth in the ruin of their city.

“UNSULLIED! I AM NO LONGER YOUR MASTER!” Corlys said as he broke the whip and Viserra had Dreamfyre burn it into ashes.

“From this day, from this moment forth, you are all free men! And as free men, I ask you, to serve my house and I willingly. Together, we will sack the Slaver Cities of Yunkai and Meereen, and you will be the guardians of your fellow slaves whom you will free from the shackles of slavery and bring to freedom on the Isle of Cedars across the Bay! What say you?”

“We will fight for Velaryon! For Zaldilaros!” One Unsullied Captain eventually said after a pause, and soon the whole army followed suit.

“Velaryon! Zaldilaros!” They chanted, as did the slaves they had freed.

“I thank you for your loyalty! In a week’s time we march, for Yunkai and war!” Corlys shouted and the slaves cheered eagerly.

“Until then my friends. Laugh and be merry! Enjoy your freedom! On the morrow we load the ships, for the freed slaves and the riches and food to be moved to Velos on the Isle of Cedars. There they will settle and make homes for themselves, and when this campaign has ended, the Unsullied will join them, and defend them forevermore!”

The freed slaves and the Unsullied cheered. That night, a great feast was held outside Astapor even as the city continued to burn. The freed slaves of Astapor mingled with the Velaryon soldiers and were merry.

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Tenth Moon, 98 AC

Three months after the Sack of Astapor, the Velaryon Army, now some twenty thousand strong with the addition of the Unsullied and the slave soldiers of Yunkai, marched onwards to Meereen.

They had spent the past three months sacking the city of Yunkai and raiding the hinterlands of both Yunkai and Astapor, freeing slaves wherever they went and seizing whatever wealth, ships, and foodstocks they could find.

The Velaryon fleet was tasked with transporting all these freedmen and the wealth and provisions to the Isle of Cedars, where work was currently underway to rebuild Velos and settle farmlands to feed the freed slaves in the long term.

In the short term however, the slaves would be fed easily with the foodstuffs they had seized from Astapor and Yunkai. Viserra was well aware that the surviving people of Astapor and Yunkai would have a great famine due to the loss of their foodstuffs, but she could not bring herself to care after seeing for herself the extent of their brutality toward the slaves. Right now, Viserra wished her ancestors had done the job properly and wiped out the Ghiscari culture entirely rather than letting it survive in any way.

Unlike Tyrosh, where the slaves had outnumbered the freeborn three to one before they had seized the city, in Astapor and Yunkai, the reverse was the case. They constantly exported and traded slaves, and the slaves were treated with such brutality that had they outnumbered the freeborn, they would have surely butchered them all already. As it was the slaves had taken to killing many of their masters and the freeborn in brutal reprisal and unlike in Tyrosh, Viserra and Corlys had not cared enough to stop them. They had no intention to rule Slaver’s Bay, it could burn for all they cared.

Having finished up in Yunkai finally, they were to move on to Meereen. As the army crossed over into Meereenese territory, Viserra was horrified to see a slave child nailed up on the first milepost. The boy could not be older than five, and his entrails were hanging out, with one arm outstretched and facing Meereen. For a moment, Viserra saw her son Daeron on that post. She had missed his fifth nameday. She shook her head desperately and the image of her son was gone, but the sight that remained was no less haunting.

Corlys ordered the Tide Guard to remove the child and bury him. Viserra grit her teeth as she watched them take his body down, forcing herself to not vomit from the disgust and horror she felt at the sight.

Their army continued its march and the Great Masters of Meereen had fled before their advance. They had harvested all they could and burned what they could not, bringing all their wealth, slaves, and people north with them as they retreated. Scorched fields and poisoned wells were all they came across as they marched, requiring the Velaryon Fleet to continuously resupply them. “They’re doing it for us,” Viserra had remarked to Corlys as they marched.

Unfortunately, that was not all that they were greeted with. At every milepost, another slave child was nailed, and as if they were taunting them, the Great Masters had begun nailing slave children with silver hair, likely of Lyseni stock. It made it even easier for Viserra to see her own children’s likeness in the cruelly executed slave children.

By the time they reached Meereen, Viserra had counted one hundred and sixty-three slave children nailed to the mileposts. One hundred and sixty-three miles, one hundred and sixty-three taunts. Her fury could not be restrained any longer.

“Corlys,” Viserra said, gritting her teeth. “I will burn this city to the ground, as my ancestors did Old Ghis. Tear down its buildings brick by brick, reduce them to ash and cinder with dragonflame and sow its seeds with salt, sulfur, and the skulls of slavers.”

“Let me sack it first. When its wealth is taken and its slaves freed, the Velaryon Army will follow your every command with Meereen.”

The Sack of Meereen was by far the most brutal so far. The city was larger than both Yunkai and Astapor combined, and was swollen with wealth and people from the Meereenese retreat. The Velaryon Army and the Unsullied took out their anger and wrath from the horrid sights they had seen along their journey out on the city.

Astapor and Yunkai had been sacked in three days each, Meereen was sacked in nine. By the end of it, the survivors had fled into the countryside where they cared not to follow them. Their army pulled down the walls and slew all the slavers. The freed slaves and looted treasures and foodstuffs were loaded up onto the Velaryon fleet as well as the Meereenese merchant and military ships they had seized and slowly moved to the Isle of Cedars.

Viserra had personally fed several of the Great Masters to Dreamfyre herself, and she had had the remainder nailed to crosses in the plaza beneath the Great Pyramid of Meereen. Everything of value had been removed from the city, and the slaves had all been freed and sent to Velos. Most of the freeborn had fled into the countryside during the sack already and if any remained? Collateral damage. Such was the way of the world.

With nothing else stopping her, Viserra mounted Dreamfyre and they rose into the sky together. They climbed higher and higher, until they were well above the Great Pyramid of Meereen.

“Dracarys!” Viserra commanded and Dreamfyre bellowed out a great stream of azure fire. The Great Pyramid melted and warped before the heat of Dreamfyre’s flames and the structure began crumbling. Unfortunately, much like her ancestors had faced with the colossal Great Pyramid of Old Ghis, pyramids were remarkably resilient to dragonfire so unless she wanted to spend a week melting it, there would be little she could do the pyramid. Nevertheless, she did her best, melting all the entrances of the pyramid shut and warping its shape.

Moving on from the pyramid, Viserra and Dreamfyre laid waste to every street and building in the city with long bursts of flame as they flew over them, setting them all aflame. It took several hours before all of Meereen was on fire and still Viserra did not stop, adding more fire to the carnage wherever she felt there was too little destruction. She took a savage glee in razing Meereen to the ground. When her wrath had finally burned through, Meereen looked more destroyed than Velos had.

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Eleventh Moon, 98 AC

With Yunkai and Astapor sacked, Meereen razed, and the wealth and slaves of all three cities taken, they had finally sailed back to Velos. Viserra found herself stunned by the progress Aurane had made with the outpost in just four months. All the rubble had been cleared, and the work was well underway building new houses and clearing the neighboring forests for farmland.

Former slaves from the cities of the Bay filled the outpost and mingled and worked on rebuilding it. Not every slave had been brought to Velos of course. Though the Velaryons had freed hundreds of thousands of slaves, not all had chosen to come to the Isle of Cedars, nor could they all, for the island remained undeveloped and could not support so many at once, even with the foodstuffs they had taken.

Many slaves had chosen to remain behind in Astapor and Yunkai, where they now ruled instead of the masters and in the hinterlands, hundreds of thousands more had remained enslaved on the estates that the Velaryons had not had time or the care to raid. They had come for revenge and wergilds, not to liberate all the slaves.

Still they had extended an open offer to the freedmen of Yunkai and Astapor to flee to the Isle of Cedars at any time should they need it. Hopefully by then, the island would be more developed and able to support them. It was of considerable size and would be more than capable of supporting every slave in Slaver’s Bay was it not a wilderness.

As the Sea Snake moored, Viserra and Corlys were greeted by excited chants and cheers as the crowds shouted Zaldilaros, and Velaryon. They walked out and greeted the crowds while the Tide Guard cleared the way for them to move to their destination.

Finally, they made their way through the excited crowds and arrived at the house they had been told Aurane had claimed for himself. They had also been told that Aurane had a surprise for them both that he had requested the garrison not mention to them until they arrived.

As they entered the house, Viserra saw Aurane speaking with another silver haired man. His eyes were indigo just like Corlys’ were. She noticed that the man had a striking resemblance to Victor Velaryon, Corlys and Aurane’s uncle.

“Lucerys?” Her husband asked in shock.

Viserra turned to him, seeing the surprise and disbelief in his eyes. So this was their son’s namesake? Lucerys Velaryon, son of Victor, cousin of Corlys and Aurane?

The now named Lucerys Velaryon did not answer in words but instead walked up to his cousin and embraced him dearly. “I knew you would return Corlys.”

“How?” Corlys asked, still lost for words.

Lucerys had a sad smile. “When Velos fell, I and a few others managed to survive the destruction. We fled deep into the interior of the island where the Ghiscari and slavers would not find us. Soon enough they began fighting each other and they had forgotten about us entirely.

“We built a village of sorts in the interior, hunting pigs and monkeys for food, and picking mushrooms and fruits to eat. We even managed to salvage some mulberries from the outpost to grow, among other crops.”

“How many of you?” Corlys asked.

“About a hundred of us only. We’ve been just waiting in the interior for so many years wondering if and when our brethren would ever return from the west. You would not believe how exuberant we were when our hunters reported seeing men with the seahorse sigil emblazoned on their doublets exploring the island. I rushed to meet them immediately and they took me to see Aurane, and well the rest is obvious isn’t it?”

“When was this?”

“About a week ago. Aurane and I have been spending that time catching up. He’s been telling me all about Tyrosh and your wonderful children. Corlys, I am sorry about Rhaekar.”

Corlys’ smile faded briefly. “Thank you Lucerys. We avenged his death, but I still mourn him sometimes.”

“You should always mourn family who have passed. Where is my father? And everyone else?” Lucerys asked.

“Your father is holding Tyrosh for us at the moment. Aurane’s wife Alys, and their children, and my children are in Tyrosh as well. Uncle Jorgen, and Irina and her children are on Driftmark still. Ah, where are my manners, I don’t believe you two have ever met. Lucerys, this is my wife Viserra,” Corlys said, introducing them.

“A pleasure to meet you Princess,” Lucerys said as he kissed her hand.

“The pleasure is mine Ser Lucerys. I have heard much about you from Corlys.”

“All good things I hope,” he said smiling.

“They were,” Viserra reassured him.

“So what’s the plan now?” Lucerys asked Corlys.

“Well when we are finished up here in Slaver’s Bay, we’ll be returning to Tyrosh. You can come along and meet Alys and the children, and see your father again. Your sister and Irina and the rest of our family is still in Westeros and we intend to return to Driftmark soon as well.”

“That’s all well and good, and I will gladly go and see them, but I am the Governor of Velos and I intend to return here eventually and keep that post if you will have me.”

“Of course!” Corlys said. “If you want it still, it’s yours.”

Lucerys nodded. “So what’s the plan here then? Aurane has had my people showing his around the interior, and it’s hard to miss all the slaves that keep getting offloaded here from the mainland every day.”

“We have sacked Yunkai and Astapor, and we razed Meereen to the ground. The wealth of all three cities has been brought here, along with enough food to sustain the slaves here for at least a year, possibly longer. We’ll set up a route to Tyrosh as well to try and bring in enough food long enough for Velos to set up its own farmlands.”

“So we are officially annexing the Isle of Cedars this time?”

“Under the Archonate of Tyrosh yes. The island is more than large enough to support all these freed slaves in the long run, all it needs is time to set up its farmlands to feed them. I expect over the coming years as the Ghiscari will recover, any slaves that haven’t yet arrived here will find their way here, and the Velaryon Fleet will be on standby to ferry them over at all times as they wish.”

“We’re outright colonizing the island then, using the former slaves of the Bay as the colonists and allowing us to develop the island quickly. Clever as always Corlys,” Lucerys praised his cousin.

“That’s not all. We’ve already punished Meereen, Yunkai, and Astapor, but New Ghis was involved in the attack as well and their harassment of our trade routes forced us to stop our trade with the Jade Sea. That’s not something that we can forgive.

“I intend to conquer and annex New Ghis, with Ghaen as its hinterland to feed it. It will secure our route to the Jade Sea and give us another group of islands to settle the freed slaves on. We can expel all the freeborn Ghiscari as well so they don’t give us any trouble.”

“I see you are ambitious as ever as well Corlys,” Lucerys observed.

Corlys smiled. “Perhaps, though I find that my ambitions have been tempered with pragmatism and wisdom these days. Fact of the matter is, New Ghis must be ours for our route to the Jade Sea to be secure again.”

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Second Moon, 99 AC

True to Corlys’ words, only a few weeks after returning to Velos, the Velaryon fleet had moved again, landing in Ghaen and seizing control of the large island before they had sacked and conquered the city of New Ghis. Not even the famed Iron Legions of New Ghis could stand before Dreamfyre’s fury.

In the months since, they had expelled all the freeborn Ghiscari, especially the nobles, and settled the three islands of Ghaen, New Ghis, and Ghilos, with freed slaves from Ghiscar, as well as some excess from Velos that were burdening the outpost’s food stocks.

At Corlys’ command, New Ghis was renamed in her honor as Viserria and the city, along with Velos in the Isle of Cedars, would be the two main waystations for the reopened Jade Sea trade routes. The island groups they were capital of would serve as important colonies and bases providing key resources and exports for the Velaryons in the center of the Summer Sea. Perhaps many decades for now, they might even be bases from which they might colonize the Basilisk Isles to the south as well.

Perhaps it was due to their experience in Tyrosh, but Viserra and the Velaryons found little difficulty integrating the Isle of Cedars and the islands of New Ghis to their rule, taking quick and easy possession of all the slavers’ property and transferring and settling slaves. Still it would take many more years before their new colonies were fully developed and operational, but thankfully that did not require their personal presence.

A distant cousin of Corlys, Aethan, descended from a younger son of the first Lord Daemon, was charged with holding Viserria and Ghaen. He would be answerable to Lucerys in Velos in the long term once he returned from visiting family with Corlys and herself in the west.

A hundred ships of the Velaryon Fleet had been left behind to defend the colonies and guard the trade routes. Slaver’s Bay had been broken and would pose no threat to them. They had seized almost every ship from the mainland to supplement the hundred ships they were leaving behind, be it for war, trading, or fishing. Over the coming years, it was quite likely many more slaves would flee from Ghiscar to the Isle of Cedars and Ghaen and the squadrons of the Velaryon fleet left behind here were tasked with transporting those refugees to the islands.

The only real threat to their colonies in the region now, was Volantis. Volantis had not approved of their war with Slaver’s Bay, and they had refused to provision their fleet in either Lys or Volantis itself on the journey eastward. Perhaps an indicator of the fact that they had never been anything more than allies of convenience to Volantis, an alliance that was beginning to fray as the Velaryons waxed in power and expanded their territory further.

Their actions against the slave trade likely did not help improve opinions in Volantis. Astapor, Yunkai, Meereen, and New Ghis had each been big parts of the slave trade, and the Velaryons had destroyed or conquered each city and freed all the slaves, crippling the slave trade. Their fleets were also not going to allow slaver ships to pass the Gulf of Grief from now on, effectively ending the slave trade in Slaver’s Bay.

Volantis was currently waging war to conquer Mantarys, Tolos, and Elyria. Each city was Valyrian in origin, with majority of their people still having Valyrian looks and speaking High Valyrian. Volantis who considered herself heir of the Freehold had always been interested in conquering them and they were acting now.

Their Conches had informed them that they had ambitions to extend their rule to the ruins of Bhorash, and perhaps even to the destroyed ruins of Meereen, in an attempt to secure the lucrative gap in the slave trade the destruction of Slaver’s Bay had brought. It made some sense, as they could use the dragon road between Meereen and Volantis to move slaves by land to Volantis and export them from there by sea or the Rhoyne.

Of course, that required Volantis to win the war, as they were currently also having skirmishes with Pentos, Norvos, Qohor, and Essaria, all backed by Braavos, with the potential to escalate into a war the Free Cities had not seen the like of since the Century of Blood.

Not that any of this was truly Viserra or House Velaryon’s concern. Essos knew better than to provoke their wrath at this point, their demonstration in Slaver’s Bay had made it clear what the price of angering House Velaryon was. Viserra doubted they would see any trouble in Essos for now.

Her thoughts dwelt on her children. They had missed Jace and Luke’s nameday already in First Moon, and today was Laena’s nameday. They were already on route back to Tyrosh, nearing the Doom. Hopefully they could make it back in time for Daeron’s nameday at least, so they wouldn’t have to miss it again. The power, prestige, and wealth of House Velaryon had grown because of her and Corlys’ separation from their children and Viserra begrudgingly accepted that it had been necessary but she had no wish to be like her parents and neglect her children for governance and politics.

With any luck, they could make it back to Tyrosh in time for Daeron’s fifth nameday and after they had spent a few months seeing to any remaining matters in Tyrosh or Slaver’s Bay, it would be time to return home to Driftmark. Back to Westeros, where House Targaryen dwelt…

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Author’s Note: I had some difficulties deciding how to format this chapter, like what mix of exposition, dialogue, and action to choose, which scenes to show, etc. Ultimately I ended up with this, I hope you guys liked the chapter and the results of the Velaryon retribution to Slaver’s Bay. Stay tuned for the next chapter!

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Mehdude

Awesome!

Tom Tat

Damn, all wealth of Slavery Bay is now in Corolys hand. He is probably the richest man in the world at this point.

Northerner

Very cool and nice to see that the trials and tribulations of the characters in Tyrosh have started to pay off! Have you planned the next few chapters as further build up or are you going to have a series of shorter interludes like after the last big conquest? Maybe some introspection from Jaehaerys or more plotting from overreaching Otto? Either way this was a very satisfying chapter so well done!

King_Under

Cant wait for the Westeros reaction to the conquest/sacking from the King to the Faith.

Tertius711

Maybe not yet but he's certainly on the way there!

Tertius711

Those will be coming eventually, worry not!

Tertius711

Thanks! Glad you are seeing the trials of Tyrosh finally bear fruit! The next chapter is the return to Driftmark, so we are back full force into Westeros politics as Viserra's last thoughts indicate. House Targaryen awaits the Velaryons! Glad you liked the chapter and found it satisfying!

Mrsean22

Well thats a big message to all of Essos and Westeros. Don't mess with the Velaryons unless you have a dragon. Otto probably feeling pretty validate on not starting anything now but question is are the lords of Westeros learn this too?

Timofei Alechkevitch

Like it a lot. Am just wondering why the masters in Meereen and New Ghis didn't flee after hearing of what happened in the other two cities. It's clear that from the child crucifixion thing that Meereen had heard of the sacking of Yunkai and Astapor, but for some reason their masters didn't flee, since: "Viserra had personally fed some of the the Great Masters to Dreamfyre," and also, "had the remainder nailed to crosses." So why didn't the Masters flee? Sorry if I'm making a big deal out of it, just seems a plothole that could be very easily fixed. Still loved the chapter though. Didn't think of colonising New Ghis, but it does make a lot of sense. Just thought it would be too difficult for some reason, but it ought not to be. Can't wait for the return to Westeros next chapter. Although I would also love to see the reactions of the Targaryens for the past ~6-8 years since the timeskip.

Timofei Alechkevitch

Also, since we're establishing Feitoria's up in here like we're the Portugese empire, I wonder if there's gonna be more and where. I'd suggest having one down in the Summer Isles and maybe the Basilisk Isles and then one on the long way around the Jade Gates. Create a kind of Triangle between the Summer Isles, Tyrosh and the Stepstones, and the Jade Gates and Seas, with the other stops serving as places to stop by and reprovision on the way.

ha vu

One of my predictions for the future is that the future Velaryon would slowly conquer a large chunk of Essos in order to directly contest the Targ's position as the superpower. The Targaryen during this time will probably focus on centralizing their power and finish what Aegon started - directly control most of Westeros and be done with feudalism. The Targaryen with a fully centralized Westeros behind them would make a fearsome foe. In the end (?), it would be a race to see who could finish their journey first and amass enough land and resources to crush the other. Or they just ignore each other and stay content with sharing the number 1 spot which I doubt an empire would do. In this race, I am confident in the Velaryon's ability to win, not just for their status as the protagonist but because it is objectively easier to start from starch than to fix the old one. And Velaryen for its unique position as a rising power would face constant pushback from its newly acquired territory which means it would sometimes be forced to hold its territory a lot closer than the Targaryen (as shown with their conquest of Tyrosh). This outcome could be a blessing in disguise as they are a lot freer to mold and govern without pesky power blocs and nobility blocking their way - they are freer in using brute force. And judging by this chapter, they are perfecting the formula for future conquest at lightning speed. Also, the Velaryon probably would face constant challenges and difficulties along the way as nothing is easy in Essos which would make them grow exponentially. Conflicts are always the chance for growth. As for the Targaryen, I kind of feel like they have been very idle in their pursuit of excellency. They have reason to be idle as they control a very large continent with hardly any threat they can't deal with using dragons. And they seem to just place themselves into the stagnant Westeros forgetting to move. The Velaryon rise did give a clue to a new rival but judging on the result, the Targaryen nearly crushed their rival. By now, even if the ban seems toothless and the tide starting to turn, they have completely pushed the Velaryen off of any chance for dominance in Westeros. If they can, and it is very likely, make a truce with the Velaryon, they would still be able to continue with their dominance of Westerosi like before. The Targs never need to reach further, fully digesting Westeros would make them full for centuries.

Tertius711

A big one indeed. Were the lords of Westeros wise enough to learn from Harrenhal?

Tertius711

They're already considering the Basilisk Isles in the future. You're proposing one in the Cinnamon Straits as well? Interesting, and it may very well happen. Stay tuned! Thanks for the comment and proposal!

Robin

I really like Lucerys’s survival. And I didn’t expect the conquering of New Ghis/Viserria but I like it. Though I am curious how the culture will develope. With Tyrosh they were able to bring enough people from Driftmark that they had a lot of influence on the culture. But the Isle of Cedars and Viserria will be populated mostly by ex slaves.

Tertius711

Well they are the descendants of the idiots who fought five wars with Valyria and kept coming back for more despite losing brutally each time until Valyria got fed up with them. They are also the ancestors of the idiots who fucked around with Dany. So yeah a combination of super arrogance and low IQ and a general forgetfulness of the power of dragons they need a reminder for. Some smarter ones did flee deep into the interior and will likely crawl back in eventually but several still stayed and got janked for it. Thanks! Stay tuned for the return! We will see the Targaryen reactions and views of this eventually!

Tertius711

Great comment, thank you very much for it. Yes the future of Westeros and Essos under the respective houses of Targaryen and Velaryon will be very interesting indeed. There's a lot planned to explore this dynamic so stay tuned for it!

Tertius711

Glad you liked Lucerys' survival and the conquest of New Ghis! Yes the culture of the Isle of Cedars and Viserria will be quite different from Tyrosh due to being populated by the various disparate slave groups of Slaver's Bay. Still High Valyrian and later the Zaldilaros Sect of the Faith of the Seven will bind them to the Velaryons they already worship as liberators easily.

DisillusionedSnacc

God this is sooo good tho when will we see the chapters with the King

Tertius711

Thanks glad you liked it. By chapters with the King do you mean Jaehaerys interludes or chapters featuring Jae? I haven't decided on the former but the latter will be by Chapter 38-39. Stay tuned!

peterodatilo

Awesome chapter! The velaryons conquering new ghis was definetely unexpected, but makes sense in the long term. They are effectively THE marine superpower of planetos at the moment, that's for sure.

Tertius711

Glad you liked the chapter! Braavos and Volantis would disagree but yeah pretty much.

Felipe Astur

Perfect… now they can go back to make little Jay more miserable.

Dragonslayer29

Great job on covering the whole conquest of slavers bay and how they used both force and wit to gain an army to conquer. I can’t wait to see the Velyarons back at Driftmark to cause more trouble for everyone also I’m excited to see how you portray the Starks as they were always my favorite House in ASOIF. I’m curious how many Unsullied did they get and how big are each island they can control as I’m trying to picture how they can fit all those free slaves on they islands.

Tertius711

Glad you liked it! Stay tuned for my admittedly unfocused portrayal of the Starks. The Velaryons got ten thousand Unsullied not counting those whose training wasn’t yet complete. As for the islands, the Isle of Cedars and Ghaen are really fricking huge. Like Tarth/Arbor size. Check out the attached map to see what I mean.

Robin

So looking at the map of the Velaryon State, and reading about the travel time I think there should be a colony or port midway between Tyrosh and New Ghis. Right now, there’s the main area of the Westeros and Tyrosh lands, and the 5 months travel there’s Velos and New Ghis. Having a midway point would make travel easier and response times faster. Maybe Naath?

Tertius711

There’s no other option than Volantis and Lys tbch. Naath has Butterfly Fever, so it would be suicidal.

Robin

I just realized there won’t be a second generation from the Unsullied. I’m curious on how the population of Isle of Cedars and Ghaen will develop.

Tertius711

There won’t be any from the Unsullied lol but there’s literally hundreds of thousands of former slaves on both island groups now.

Robin

Oh yeah, I’d forgotten about that. Then in that case I’d say Lys, the Velaryon’s have a lot of practice with islands.

Tertius711

Mmm. Would require war with Volantis first.

Timofei Alechkevitch

Yeah, I think one in the Cinnamon Straits makes a lot of sense, because it lets you avoid the Jade Gates, because there ain't no way Qarth doesn't toll the hell outta all the ships that pass through there. Sure it's more of a long way around, but it also lets you establish trade relations with all the people there for sweet sweet spices (such as, I presume, the cinnamon the straits are named after). I was also suggesting one on the Summer Isles, either on the Indigo straits, or on the top of Omboru (the big middle island) right were there are the straits between it and the big top island. Both are strategic locations, the Velaryons have traded with the Summer Islanders (if I remember correctly), and this would let them try and cut into the South Sea Company's market. It might not be feasible, but I reckon it makes at least a modicum of sense.

Maciek

Nice suprise for the end of week ;) I'd like to say that Corly's retaliation surpassed any expectations, but it'd be a lie :) What I didn't expect was both conquering New Ghis and survival of Lucerys. House of Velaryon grew both in territories and family members. If news about new Velaryon's conquests reached Westeros, I guess that old Jaehaerys thanked the Gods again that he missed helping in sacking Velos few years age. Cause otherwise, if there was any proof about that, it's hard to know what Corlys would do.........Though who knows, maybe thanks to those last evidences how his grand plan backfired tenfold, he'll have enough and simply die ;) Now, when all Essos matters are solved and resolved, it's time for Velaryons to return Westeros. And there, Targs are waiting.....I guess it's time for Round Two...... One question, though. now, when Velaryons have solid outpost in that part of known world, any chances for some expeditions to the Old Valyria?

Maciek

Maybe not. While it'd require some careful negotitions plus maybe some bending of rules on Corly's side, he could offer Volantis free hand in subjugating mentioned smaller cities in exchange for the same in case of Lys. It's distant and small possibility, but it still exists.

Jordan Redstark

great chapter after the Velaryon's fully secure Ghaen New Ghis/Viserra And begin full reconstruction of Velos do you intend for the Velaryon's to claim any of the Ghiscari mainland North of New Ghis I'm sure that New Ghis had some presence on the mainland so probably along the coast especially since there is no other Ghiscari city anywhere near by except the Ruins of Old Ghis. but they probably are in no hurry Astapor Yunkai and Meereen are in ruins and will take decades to recover maybe more especially since they can't use slaver bay to transport slaves anymore, they would be forced to use the old Valyrian road system to transfer any that's if Volantis Does conquer them why they are in their weakened state. there reconstruction might be aided with the in fluke of the freeborn Ghiscari expelled from New Ghis but Not by much. ha maybe Corly could claim Old Ghis and build a settlement there to use as a base to govern some of the Ghiscari mainland near the old city and along the coast he could even name it after himself it could just be me but the city of Corlys doesn't sound so bad and kind of rolls of the tongue the twin cities of Corlys and Viserra being named after you would make a great legacy. just to be clear so I know that I've interpreted it right Astapor Yunkai and Meereen aren't fully Destroyed to the level of Old Ghis from what I'm getting here they have been sacked and raised but the local Population wasn't wiped out and while I'm sure there were a lot of revenge killings and with most of the slaves leaving the slave cities must have endured a large population decline they aren't dead uninhabited ruins. Viserra talked about Meereen sharing Old Ghis fate, but I assume that just anger talking and unless they are willing to stay there and make sure no trace of the city remains and kill every man woman or child there then burning it won't necessarily have the same result. when the Valyrian were done with Old Ghis everything had been destroyed the whole population sold into slavery except those that fled the carnage south and eventually founded the city of New Ghis. and while some cities have been sacked and never recovered some have been sacked burned and raised to the ground through history only for the survivors to slowly rebuild though perhaps not to the same level of grandeur and power they once processed. if I was Corlys after i had taken and sacked a city i would have purged the local nobility of any that would have been a threat and given their property and estate to some of the minor and poorer nobility that have shown themselves to be more pragmatic like when Dany took Meereen she gained the support of some of the nobility of Meereen like with Skahaz mo Kandaq and the House Kandaq. revenge for Velos is good an all but don't let a golden opportunity to bring all of slaver bay under your control either through direct rule as with the annexation of Isle of Cedars and New Ghis or through a form of indirect rule through a vassalization or tributary system or maybe even a protectorate system. since a full-on annexation of 4 all cities at once would be a logistical nightmare for Tyrosh and the Velaryon's and also might send the Targaryen's into panic mode for each city I would create a council from amongst the remaining nobility that I thought I could control and wouldn't do something stupid like and task them with governing and rebuilding of their respective cities as my puppets while Tyrosh slowly exert more influence over time on the cities and its institutions until they were made either vassals of Tyrosh like how the Romanian principalities of Wallachia Moldavia and even Transylvania for a time were vassals of the Ottoman Empire with varying levels of autonomy or full on annexed if Corlys thinks Tyrosh has the power to fully control those cities. really the only power near slavers bay that could realistically try to step in to stop them is Volantis and given that they are busy with wars of their own they probably aren't interested in starting another one they probably remember what happened last time that Volantis took on more that it could chew when their attempt to rebuild the Valyrian Freehold under them ended with them being overwhelmed on all sides but then again perhaps Corlys is content with what he has achieved. sorry that this was so long but it gave me ideas of all the possibilities that the Velaryon's have in slavers bay.

Jesús Leonardo

It would be amazing if expeditions to Valyria were made and succeeded where King Tommen II Lannister failed.

Tertius711

The Cinnamon Straits are a potential option, maybe on the southern end of Great Moraq? Something to look into for the future. The Summer Islands are the other way around from their trade route with Yi Ti so they might just decide on the Basilisk Isles plan instead. A) Clear out corsairs B) Secure the strategic position of the Basilisk Isles for themselves and be able to interdict trade between Viserria and the Basilisks C) Climatically the Basilisk Isles can grow all the Summer Islands produce.

Tertius711

No city the Velaryons can offer is worth more to Volantis than Lys. War is a must.

Tertius711

Did it at least match your expectations? Glad I was able to surprise you there! Well ultimately even if there was evidence Corlys couldn't do squat to Jaehaerys, would have made relations even more tense though. Oh yes, back in Westeros at last! No. Nobody is sending expeditions to Valyria with Aerea in living memory. It's not even legal in Westeros.

Tertius711

Sorry but expeditions to Valyria are unlikely. It's very suicidal and has a proven record for failure. Plus Aerea is in living memory.

Tertius711

The Velaryons have zero interest in annexing any land or exerting any influence on mainland Slaver's Bay at present. They control the exit of the Bay navally anyway so whenever Slaver's Bay maybe eventually recovers they can make them subservient to them on the drop of a dime anyway.

Jordan Redstark

fair enough and slavers bay it is quite a fare way from the Velaryon heartlands and such a large amount of territory would probably require them to have more of a personal presence in the region then simply leaving it to a governor probably a lot easier to simply rebuild Velos and Populate it and New Ghis with the freed slave population have control of the entrance to slavers bay and not have to worry about their loyalty all the time.

Tertius711

Precisely. They've already gotten everything they want. There's no need to map paint everything.

Jordan Redstark

quick question did you make up the names for the individual stepstone isles like high watch redwater and veiled isle just to name a few that you use in your story because a ck3 agot submod i use called AGoT Cities & Wall Mechanics just updated, and he added the stepstones to the mod and the names for the individual isle are the same ones you used which was a cool Suprise that a modder i follow used your work since I've never heard of the stepstone isle referred to by those names.

Jordan Redstark

oh, give the name of the individual islands match the houses that rule them i assumed that you did but still a cool coincidence to learn anyway you must have really planned out your story well since it makes sense that Jaehaerys would give lands to those houses.

Tertius711

Oh I intentionally gave places like Highwatch and Redwater to Hightower and Redwyne. The names just fit too well with an uncanny coincidence and like you said, it made sense Jaehaerys would give those islands to those houses. I tried fitting all the islands to the house names as much as possible.

Jordan Redstark

also, last question does Corlys and Viserra children use the title prince or princess I wonder what title the children of the hereditary archon of Tyrosh would use Corlys is referred to as Your Excellency not quite a Your Grace but I expect him using the already established title of Archon was on propose taking the title king couldn't end well not at such an early stage when their control of Tyrosh was precarious at best. I think they could get away with it with no real reaction since they are Jaehaerys Grandchildren and as long as it's clear that they go by the title prince or princess of Tyrosh I don't see much coming of it the Iron Throne might not acknowledge it but that is what I guess would be their reaction at worst since it could be seen as house Targaryen recognizing House Velaryon as royalty and an acknowledgment of their rule over Tyrosh.

Tertius711

I was actually thinking on this for quite some time and I ultimately decided that for now at least Corlys' children aren't going to be styled anything in Tyrosh, even with their father being Archon and their mother having the courtesy/informal title of Princess of Tyrosh. Stepping on the Targaryens' toes again seems a bit unwise given the rapport they've managed to build with Aemon and the others. That being said if they don't get what they want from that rapport in the coming years, they can easily bring out the princely titles in Tyrosh.

KayS

Can’t wait to see the reactions in Westeros.

Mitchell Albright

Great chapter, it is interesting that a so many ASOIAF stories set in the time of dragons never go to slavers bay, nice to see what a dragon on Dreamfyre’s level does to any enemy. Good job!

Tertius711

Stay tuned! We will have them eventually!

Tertius711

Glad you liked it! And yeah most Age of Dragons stories don’t have reasons to go so far away from Westeros so we never see Slaver’s Bay.

Jordan Redstark

I wonder exactly what the best outcome for both sides would be when proper negotiations begin. For House Velaryon the best outcome would be the removal of all sanctions and the transfer of the stepstones to House Velaryon to Tyrosh in particular if possible and an acknowledgment of their rule over Tyrosh and certain right and privileges that no other house in Westeros has. For House Targaryen I guess would be for Corlys to swear fealty to the Iron Throne as the Archon of Tyrosh bringing the free city into their realm and for his sons to be warded at Kings Landing to try and install a sense of loyalty in them maybe to arrange a couple marriages between Corlys children and some members of the royal family to bind both houses together. it will be interesting to see how it all progresses.

Tertius711

Great ideas. Stay tuned to see how it all unfolds over the coming chapters.

Jesús Leonardo

I guess after sacking the three cities now Corlys is richer than the Lannisters.

Tertius711

Perhaps. Due to how the Lannisters’ wealth works it’s really hard to say.

Tertius711

That’s something that’s very easily butterflied so don’t expect it too much.

Dante-Raptor5580

Yeah just thinking that if Baelon does get appendicitis then Corlis can with his medical knowledge he can save Baelon and have the king forgive him.

Tertius711

Even Corlys’ current level of medical advancement (which is his university’s and not his own) won’t save Baelon from appendicitis. It’s far more likely he just never develops it to begin with.

Gary Brown

Love the chapter great work. Had some ideas for next chapter since next chapter the Velaryons are going to be back in Driftmark they could try to have some of the more friendly Targaryens such as Baelon and Alyssanne over for a hopefully peaceful meal or two to help ease the tensions between them. Also that would be a great opportunity for Grandma to meet her grandkids and their dragons.

Tertius711

Thanks. And man you keep reading my mind.

Jordan Redstark

another possible colonial option besides the colonization of the Basilisk Isles would be for House Velaryon to take the city and isle of Vahar and also the Isle of Lesser Moraq to control the Cinnamon straits to bypass Qarth and its tariffs. The Velaryon's could end up with their own Portuguese trade Empire. https://ibb.co/858ws14

Tertius711

Great suggestion! Smth to look into certainly. Would have to wait for Velos and Viserria to be fully developed IMO but it certainly could work.

Maciek

Another nice update :) Most of what I wanted to say was already mentioned and commented. I'll say only one thing: while reprimand of Velaryon's vassals will be calm, if humilitating for culprits; then dinner-read-confrontation on Dragonstone may end quite nasty, especially in case of appearance of some old, unexpected guest. Guest rights and familty ties are all and well, but it'd be better for all participant to leave their dragons somewhere - just to be sure :)

Tertius711

You posted on the wrong chapter so I got a bit confused lol. Glad you liked it! Stay tuned for the dinner next chapter!

Maciek

Sorry ;)

NJ

Rotational postings are definitely going to be a must for their men deployed to their new holdings in Slaver's Bay and or so will the establishment of their Velaryon education, religious (propaganda) institutions, because as you alluded to Lucerys is family and can be trusted but allowing that much power to amass onto any one person that is not Corlys/head of the Velaryon state/empire and a permanent force stationed there that may start to become more loyal to him/them is unwise in the long term(speaking of which I hope all of their children but Jace especially are being throughly trained and schooled and brought up in a way that befits an individual who is going to inherit an INSANE amount of power, wealth and state capacities unto his person when he inherits all this from Corlys)

Tertius711

Yep logically gotta rotate. And yeah the intensive schooling the kids are getting is quite smth.

NJ

That's good, and not just schooling but proper character development as well too(maybe a mandatory 4-5 year stint in the Navy and Army as well as university for his sons) because Corlys's kids and their kids etc( but Jace especially right now) ending up being spoiled, cruel and or incompetent hacks would be disaster for all that he has built. Hell he can and should even teach his kids of the follies of his own and their grandfather Jaehaerys's pride and arrogance (when taken too far) from the Stepstones/Tyrosh episode he just went through as well as a lesson to learn from what not to do as well.

Tertius711

I have such plans for Jace especially, as the heir he's the most important and I've got quite a lot of his character planned out already. He will most definitely be a POV character though I'm also trying to work on developing his siblings POVs and characterizations as well.

NJ

Nice! I just would hate to see any of Corlys's kids but Jace in particular end up being either an Aenys or Maegor types (which were both 2nd generation screw ups for a different reasons). Corlys has already built a much stronger and firmer foundation for his family’s dynasty Aegon I and is clearly much more forward thinking than the Targaryens, but he can’t get complacent in that regard (probably no more year + long trips with his kids not under his and Viserra's direct supervision after this lol).

Tertius711

Corlys and Viserra are infinitely better parents than Aegon and Visenya were so any Aenys or Maegor type is unlikely. And yeah they absolutely do not want to leave their kids unsupervised so long again. I think less than Aenys/Maegor, you'd see Corlys and Viserra's kids having issues of a different kind. Namely drowning in the expectations of measuring up to their highly accomplished and famous parents. The shadow Corlys and Viserra extend over them is enormous.

NJ

That is definitely going to be tough for sure lol, Corlys is likely the most famous man in the world at this point and will probably go down as maybe the most seminal and famous figure in his world's modern history and Viserra is now basically considered a goddess on Earth. Those will definitely be some interesting POVs from Jace for sure when he's older and from his younger siblings dealing with that sort of pressure/dynamic , just think even Jaehaerys in your last POV of him who was a dragon riding King who rules a continental spanning realm and was grown man felt jealous and insecure and threatened when measuring himself against Corlys and I'm sure even Aemon and Baelon do as well, so I can only imagine what C and V's kids will feel since you already innately look up to your parents as your heroes and examples (for good and for ill)

Tertius711

Yes, the shadow Corlys and Viserra cast is immense and quite frankly anything Jace and his siblings do as young adults will be motivated in the attempt to measure up to it or escape it.

NJ

Volantis is probably in for it then if that is the case lol, because really the only thing they can do to match or exceed some of their parents accomplishments is conquer and annex more territories and cities for the Velaryon state and it is only a matter of time before them and Volantis go at it in the coming decades.

omasan harriman

Great stuff as always. the velayrons are effectively a great power. I'm sure the money from slavers bay will rebuild Driftmark. what is Corlys full title,I'm thinking His Excellency Corlys, Lord of the Tides, Master of Driftmark ,Lord of Bloodstone Archon of Tyrosh Defender of the Faith. or do you addthe new islands

Tertius711

Velos and Viserria are officially Tyroshi Overseas Territories so they go under ‘Archon of Tyrosh’ You missed all of Corlys’ titles pertaining to Massey’s Hook and Stonedance.