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Thanks for your patience everyone. I wasn't feeling good before, and was worried that I caught covid, but thankfully I have avoided covid (so far, it's been a week and no symptoms), and I'm in brighter spirits for now. Enjoy your Sunday. :)

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Thruster_Check

Hey, someone should clean that up ... maybe she should have all the boys present their tongues for inspection now ... But while we're enjoying the close-up view, I've been wondering why you chose to portray this bit of her anatomy this way, as opposed to a typical canine vulva. I do like it; I'm just curious.

WheresMyALE

I just don't like the way they look. Granted I don't care for the way I drew this either, but I don't have a lot of vulva practice.

yui_olp

Is panel 2 supposed to be after Tanner climaxed and pulled out of her mouth? And she's panting because her airway was blocked before? I think the panel would've worked a little better scene transition wise if it had his cock still between her yaws.

WheresMyALE

No one has climaxed yet, but you make a good point, I should put a penis back in her mouth and maybe add some drool and a sfx in the third panel.

yui_olp

Okay, I was sure Shawl and especially Hyde got off before, but I suppose it was just pre. I must say, I'm impressed by Hyde and Tanner's ability to hold back :)