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* 283 new renders (1755 renders total)* 17 new scenes (94 scenes total)* 14k new words (76k words total)* 16 new animations (51 total)

This concludes chapter 3. This release will be exclusive for subscribers on the $5 tier+, next week I will release it for the $1 tier in Patreon. In three weeks I will make a release here, as a gift for the people in discord. In four weeks I'll make it public in other platforms.

I hope you all like this update, feel free to give me any feedback. I have used a couple AIs to help me review and fix grammar, so I hope the text quality in this update has increased. With fewer typos, and grammar mistakes.

I have also added a Walkthrough/Choice Guide to the $10 tier. I'll keep this updated in the next updates.DOWNLOAD Win/Linux: GDRIVE - PIXELDRAIN - WORKUPLOAD - GOFILE Mac: GDRIVE - PIXELDRAIN - WORKUPLOAD - GOFILE Patch 0.2.4 to 0.3: GDRIVE - PIXELDRAIN - WORKUPLOAD - GOFILE

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Malidica

Oof... gotta say, it's pretty obvious you've used AI to touch up your writing, the dialogue might have less typo's but it's got some strange grammar and dialogue repeats itself. Honestly think i preferred your ESL writing simply because it was natural and easier to autocorrect in my head.

Malidica

Finished the update, still really dig this game, looking forward to more.

Nocturnal

Hey, thanks for the feedback and support. I did use AI to correct the grammar. Didn't realize it changed the text beyond that. I'll be more careful in the future. Are these problems and repetitions are in a specific part or in the chapter in general?

Malidica

I noticed them several times in different parts of the update though they were more present in the earlier parts than the later parts.

Nocturnal

Ok. Thanks for telling me that. I do have reviews planned for the future, so I'll take notes on this issue.