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Hello! I did something incredibly, insanely stupid and added back in like, an added 15k words at the end of the chapter because I ultimately decided while proofreading that it would suit the pacing of CH15 better to have it done in CH14 instead.

As you can imagine, that made my life hell for the past (checks time) 5 hours, but it's entirely self-inflicted idiocy so 💀 At least you guys get a longer chapter out of it!

There's a couple of things to keep in mind with CH14: I changed the names of R's cousins, so that's kind of a retcon, and I also added in more checks for romance status after a significant romance choice. Previously the status wouldn't always immediately change after you made a romance decision and impact the status later, but now that's more of an instant effect!

I've also corrected a few bugs and mistakes here and there, but there's still a lot I haven't gotten to yet because my proofreading has been surface level. You know, due to aforementioned impulsive decision-making lol. I'm certain there's a bunch of stuff I missed in CH14 (Keko's scene, if you get that one on your playthrough, has ESPECIALLY given me a headache so if you see any bright red errors pop up pleaseeee let me know 🙏🏼)

Also, as an EA perk and in the interest of allowing you all to easily check out all the branches/choices/outcomes, I've enabled the backwards arrow so you don't have to constantly save and can just go back pages instead :^) Hopefully that helps!

Tip: If you're a fan of Welat (or you just want to see more of that guy) and you're not on the R romance route, I recommend choosing the "politely decline" option 👀 Sorry to R romancers, you're Welat-less I fear.

Anyways, here's the link!! Enjoy, and keep the bug report form in mind 💖

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ItaLii

I am so excited for this <3

3V31V3N39

it’s 2AM n i just finished azad’s route for this chapter, (will do everyone else in the morning) BUT IM ACTUALLY SO SCARED ABT THE ENDING IDK IF I CAN GO TO SLEEP TONIGHT

Kai

THATS SO COOL

Kai

Reported some errors I've come across but super duper amazing work as always :)

Jojo Trutwein

just finished reading it and it is excellenttttttt

Qeresî

Hope you enjoy it!! 🌸

Qeresî

Thanks so much!! Really appreciate the reports, and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter 💖💖

Qeresî

Aw, thank you!! Happy to hear it 🥰

Aki’s Ponytail

Absolutely banging chapter as always :) It was really nice to have a chapter mainly focused on our character and their inner thoughts and state of mind with everything going on, I hope our character has more chances in the near future to speak up on their personal feelings and experiences to the Li's. p.s thank you for letting us crack X lmao, it's tiding me over from D's slowburn.

Mary

Your writing is incredible!! I love love loved the chapter and all the routes 😭 ❤️ you killed it again!