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Hey all!! EA for CH15 is finally here 😊

As mentioned in the preview I posted yesterday, this will be missing the tail-end of the chapter, as well as some other things I need to add in (like codex entries + added personality trait variations). But other than that I made sure to get the big romance scenes in this one finished for you all to enjoy ✨

I don't have much else to say (my eyes are glazing over from trying to sort out the code lol) so without further ado, here's the link!!

Enjoy, and keep the bug report form in mind (this post has the latest bug fixes I've implemented as of May 23)💖

Comments

ItaLii

Ugh it’s SO GOOOD! I love this story so much

Foxglove

OMG congrats on the update, you're making my weekend! So epic

Ri

I played through all the routes. Incredible update 😭😭😭 it was so sweet to see the LIs worry about the Crown 🥺 a lot of tasty lore drops, too!

Rue

Omg... what an excellent chapter. Thank you so much, this update made my month.

Lagawara

THAT WAS SO GOOD!!! i think this is genuinely my fav chapter this far. The lore. The fights... the hurt/comfort ough..... i love that trope and you wrote it so so well !!!!! i got so scared about Tûjo too for a moment. Damn what the crown pulled was SO cool I know we had some snippet with R about it but man doing some gravity stuff is always so so neat❤️ also the crown first instinct to fight instead of flee. / them barking orders in the battlefield. My baby Theyre so grown 🥺 I found it fascinating too that we can chose what the crown and their parents used to worship its such a neat little detail. Also its so cool to me how if youre inner (i think thats the difference in the stat but im not sure lol) magic your brain almost blew up vs outer with the heart giving out its such a small detail that makes perfect sense in the world you created I Hope the crown gets to keep their golden scars cause thats SEXY and COOL as hell 👀 I feel so bad for all 4 ROs but especially for X who had to FEEL all of that too. Like seeing AND actually feeling your lover dying while you cant do shit about it. Bro the trauma. (Do it again 😏) Also big up to unromanced D who had to fight that monstrosity twice in such a short time i feel so bad for them 💀 my ass would have resigned right there like nope nope nope speaking of that beast was terryingly cool, im unfamiliar with it though, did you draw inspiration from a specific creature or did you create it specifically for Atoc? Truly terrying regardless 10/10 would not want to fight it lol Also the lil moments with the blades or your guards i love them all so baddd 😭😭 Favorite moments romance wise: probs the horse scene with D because it cracks me up & the fire temple scene (also them being feral when the crown goes down omg. 👀) X despair on the battlefield was making me CRAZY and the lil head on the shoulder when the crown wakes up oof. A's whole ass scene after the crown wakes up (dont mind me my mind is still stuck there with them telling X to fuck off) R !!!! The way they feel comfortable enough pinching the crown 🥺😭 them feeling guilty and so so scared and yet reassuring the crown as they pass out. Ough Sorry for rambling and being incoherent 🙏 that was incredible, as always you outdid yourself. I know you still got a few things to finish up on the chapter but after that i hope you take a well deserved rest!!! ❤️

Qeresî

Omg thank you so much for this amazing comment, it really made my week!!!! 🥺🥹💖💖💖 I'm really putting the Crown through a lot of shit right now, call it a trial by fire haha. And yes, you will get a choice at some point to keep the scars or to heal them! You also understood the inner vs outer magic variable correctly ✨ The man-eater is essentially a manticore, the term man-eater is just what manticore literally means (derived from the old Persian word for it!). It was part of Persian oral tradition in folktales, but I think usually in most media they make the entire head a lion's head instead of a human face because it's more palatable that way. But I really wanted to lean into the horror aspect of it so I kept the human face hehe Thanks again for the lovely words, so glad to hear you enjoyed this latest chapter so much!!

3V31V3N39

MC WAS SO BADASS I LOVE THEM 😭😭😭

Lagawara

Hey listen you're the one who made my week 👀 i keep re reading it and spotting lil details its so fun (like the difference with or without the water spirits) Genuinely feeling so dumb about the manticore!!! Its so obvious now that you say it!!! The fucking name is right there!!!!! The lion vibes + spikes !!! For some reason i forgot about the manticore and i was alongside chimeras and thinking " no thats not it" lol 🤦 feeling like the crown when A reveal who they are 😂 Thank you again for this chapter it was such a treat 💖

Runa

Hey perhaps stupid question but when did you see a difference with the water spirits? And on whose route? Because when I played (R route) the water spirits weren’t mentioned even once, even though I chose to take them with me. (Along a few other variables that were wrong.)

Lagawara

Mmm i might be super wrong but i think i saw a small difference when you chose to "go tell the camp" rather than send ziryan alone 🤔 might be wrong tho haha

sakurras

this chapter was so so so good. they're all amazing (ur brain is so big queen) but i'm a lover of angst so i ate this one UP. ty ty ty for the update!

Rachel

Loving it! Also loving the D/romance I liveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

3V31V3N39

i just gotta say i went back to reread x’s snippet from chapter 14 where it says “To put life and reputation on the line, at times to a reckless extent, if only to minimize the danger to to those who chose to follow her and those they care for. The thought of MC doing the same thing is unbearable. ” makes chapter 15 hit that much harder BECAUSE WDYM X WAS WILLING TO LOSE MORE LIVES IF IT MEANT MC WOULDNT HAVE BEEN SO RECKLESS WITH THEIR OWN LIFE 🧎🏻‍♀️🧎🏻‍♀️

dj

your writing is truly so amazing. the fight was so awesome (my words are not doing justice for how much i enjoyed this chapter) and seeing how the crown reacted on the battlefield had my jaw Dropped. i also very much enjoyed the angst thank you so much for another phenomenal chapter

SmithEK

This was as per usual brilliant. Ashti has become my favourite and Delal a close second. Tbf all if the routes are great. Only thing I have noticed but not sure if it's a bug or I'm just reading it wrong but doing R's route and I gave the merchant to Kham but for some reason he still was brought by horse on the journey.

Qeresî

Thanks so much!! 💖 I'm not very practiced with writing action/battle scenes so I'm very glad to hear you enjoyed that scene especially haha

Qeresî

Thank you so much, I appreciate it!! 💖 And yes that's definitely a bug, I'll be sure to correct it with the next update for CH15 🙏🏼