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P-26 wip (Patreon)

Published:
2022-06-09 15:36:40
Imported:
2026-06

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I'm not sure what she can say here, give me ideas pls x)

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Nyissan

Tbh I like what she says in this draft Oh except maybe acknowledging he followed her command (even if he needed encouragement)

datruerudy

I get too excited seeing this stuff and my brain goes ahsjfkfajdkdh ♡ S-So I cant help much 👉👈 huff

SpiceNWolf

I agree with Nyissan, I love the explanations about Laura's tools of the trade as it were, make gives a erotic sense of foreboding 🥵 only thing I would add is perhaps a review of the sentence structure, as I wasn't sure if the double negative was intentional or not.

SpiceNWolf
>>85515581

Again, I tend to be wordy (and use puns and alteration) but I use that to create delicious fear and anticipation. In this case, the top panel would also include something like "Perhaps a tight fit but I was feeling generous despite your earlier insubordination." to establish Laura's ability to change cage sizes before explaining the purpose of the bindings. Then in the second panel, I feel like saying something like "Opposing my will will be like your cock straining against that cage: absolutely hopeless." That sets up for the threat of reducing the size as well as the follow up on the next page to introduce spikes instead if he doesn't "get the point" and allow him to come to his senses and lick the boot. #FalseChoices