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I'm trying out a new feature: captioned illustrations.  What do you folks think?

As the tears streamed down his puffy cheeks, Fred watched helplessly as his thinning arms were swallowed into his sagging sleeves.  Mrs. Jameson was going to teach him a little lesson In sensitivity for all the cruel things he did to ;his third grade students.  Whether she was going to ever change him back, she wasn’t quite sure.  After all, she always wanted a daughter.

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Stormfries

Is hard for reading for german

stger

Great, I prefer caption text in image panels 👍

stger

The TG tag is missing

Robert Louis Stoll

I love the idea as quick oneoffs :) Sequences are preferable as always but variety is the spice of life

stger

There are two options 1) Zoe could add the text addtional to the post. So you can copy paste it easily to your translation software 2) Zoe get a comic font with lower case, which improves the readability for long panels with text.

Zoe Crockett

As Stger suggested, I have added the text to the post. The text in the drawing is now also in the post.

Zoe Crockett

Great suggestion. For future captioned illustrations, I'll include any of the dialogue or text in the post, as well.

Zoe Crockett

I'll be doing more of these in the future, then. :)

Zoe Crockett

Thanks for letting me know! It's been added.

Zoe Crockett

Thank you! There are some new sequences in the works. I'll be doing both these captioned illustrations and sequences in the future.

Actrus

Really wishing a prequel and a sequel to that. I always really like to see how the TG character look like before the transformation :)

Areat

Very neat!

Actrus

I would like to see his familly and friends reactions haha

Zoe Crockett

Which family members or friends would you like to see react? Sorry about the questions but I'm thinking about doing a sequel to this. :)

Actrus

If he was kinda the leader of his gang, it would be funny to see his teammates who doesn't how to to react and take cares of a little girl. For his familly, I won't be surprise to see his mother happy to take care again of a child - even her little (now older) sister don't let here smooch and hugs. But his father would be devastated - he was so pround of his son ! :) But I really jope if you see a sequel - which it would be formidable - you'll also show us hiw he looked before Mrs.Jameson speel :)

Zabelle

Big thumbs up! A great direction for you. Looks great!

Zoe Crockett

Thanks , Femur! I'll be doing more captioned illustrations in the future, perhaps including more involving this particular story.

stger

Any plans when and if this will be continued?

Zoe Crockett

You know, I haven't decided yet. Maybe after I've finished My Darling Hentai or Must Be Something in the Water.