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Cursed Page 18 (Patreon)

Published:
2020-12-04 20:34:01
Edited:
2021-01-18 02:13:45
Imported:
2026-06
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Ted seems to be shrinking!

Sorry for the lateness on this.  Another page will be up later this month!

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stger

glad to see this going on 👍 but his beer belly looks for me much too big. with cloth he looks really skinny before the shower. 🤷‍♂️

Zoe Crockett

I think you've got a good point. How do you feel about the page otherwise?

stger

Will you fix Ted's belly in a later update? Or leave it as it is? Just checked older pages. On the first ones a has also some kind of belly, but not that kind of gigantic. While he looked with cloth most part of the comic much slimmer. It's still the comic I look forward to the most. But the transformation goes a bit too fast for my taste, I would have taken fewer and smaller steps. And I find it strange that he hasn't noticed any of the changes yet. That all of his hair is falling out and all of a sudden his genitals are almost gone should be noticed in the shower. I think you need it for the story because it's probably Ted's trans-friend who makes him aware of the changes. However, still a very good page. We Germans love it to complain ;)

Zoe Crockett

Thanks for the input. I'll see about changing the belly. However, as for his changes, his mind is not on his own body but the girl he saw at the hotdog restaurant. His mind is too absorbed to notice the differences. Regarding the speed of the changes, how slow did you wish to see the changes? I suppose I could have made the changes slower but it would draw the story out, perhaps, longer than necessary.

Zoe Crockett

Thanks for the input. I'll see about changing the belly. However, as for his changes, his mind is not on his own body but the girl he saw at the hotdog restaurant. His mind is too absorbed to notice the differences. Regarding the speed of the changes, how slow did you wish to see the changes? I suppose I could have made the changes slower but it would draw the story out, perhaps, longer than necessary.

stger

Yeah, also thought that he is quite distracted. ;) When it comes to speed, opinions differ. I am notorious for extra slow/detailed transformations. I would have done smaller, less noticble steps at the beginning. Maybe just the beard and some smaller feet. He then wonders why the shoes fit somewhat loosely. As they become smaller and smaller throughout the day, he starts to stubble more and more often at work.... something like that. And yes you are right, that's what makes the story longer and longer. It's absolutly fine if you feel this level of detail/slowness is too much. Many will propably agree with you ;)

Ella Cherry

Things are getting even more interesting! Really enjoying this one!

Erin Brioche

Loving that foreshadowing with him noticing his own BO!

Zoe Crockett

Thanks! I suspect you've experience something similar but, as I've been transitioning via hormones , I seemed to have been able to pick up more subtle odors than I used to. Certainly, my own scent has become far more noticeable!

Erin Brioche

Definitely! My body odour's also changed a bit too (more acidic) after I started anti-T (oestrogen seems to be what changed my sense of smell).