Final help with the prologue illustration (Patreon)

I know I spammed a lot regarding this illustration, but let me do it one more time!

Well, and then the final version later on, of course!

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The illustration is quite important to me because it's the prologue for the sequel and will be seen by everyone who will ever take a look at the story!

Click me for full resolution!!! 

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The other variants are not quite done yet!

Does anyone see anything that should be edited in any way or shape?

In my eyes, it's pretty much perfect already, but the sailing boats left of Aura need to go (there's only the group there, after all). Maybe a small island on the horizon instead. Then the shadows under Chloe's breast have a weird yellow-ish tint (around her bikini bottom, too)

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If there could be anything else, please let me know!

Also, it needs to be quick because the artist wants my suggestions in a few hours!!!