Bedtime Story (Patreon)

My girlfriend likes it when I read her stories like this at night. I do need to work on my narration skills. Maybe read the stories a few times to memorize them. My voice cracked a couple times in there too, I should take breaks to dring some water next time. Other than that I dodn't think it sounds too bad, I've always been very critical of myself and my voice especially but she thinks it's sexy so I will give her that. what do you think.