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Storyboard 14 (Spoilers) (Patreon)

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2022-04-16 09:46:08
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Okay so I've been fussing over this for a week now. Something just doesn't sit well with me and I think it's Finley's reaction to the prank. Maybe it needs to be more extreme? Ideas are welcome! Also sorry for my horrible handwriting. XD I have a severe case of artist handwriting.

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Christine Lang

If you want to show Neris' concern/cautious side you could add him being concerned when he realizes she is hurt but also confused as to why. Or maybe he knows about diving and humans' sensitivity, but Rascal/Flo don't know what is going on. Or Fin could explain it to Neris?

.Valeska

Wait a minute! Does Flo have a thing for Neris? I still can't tell if she is overly cautious of Finley or if she is straight-up jealous. Thoughts?