In Every Corner page 9 WIP - lines and text (Patreon)

Slowly making my way through this thing. This page has almost finished lines, I just need to touch up 1 or 2 things. 

I especially enjoy Coughs dialogue. I'm trying to show that not only does she have an odd intonation but the way she talks is also pieced together from sound samples, essentially. 

It is more evident in the beginning of the comic, where she didn't yet get to practice talking :)