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Thanks for waiting, everyone! It's been one hell of a week, but I'm finally more or less recovered and functional again.

Almost 350 pages of a sex comic and I've somehow never drawn a lip biting kiss before. Hope I pulled it off well enough. As for everything else, I know I often detail what I'm trying to convey from a narrative point in this space but this time I'd just like you to tell me what you think if you would. Did this kiss go how you thought it might? Do the reactions, expressions, and dialogue feel like they belong? As always the feedback is appreciated.

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The Funny Hatter

I think that's the first time seeing a canonical lip-bite in this series.

Lord Washington

I was half-expecting it to cut to them renting that hotel and them finding out about Casey and her teacher.

Totes Not Thea

Love It! I can hear the squeee from here!

AlienBrain

I really didn't know what to expect from this relationship. Just happy it's happening. The lip bite looks great 🫦 and her blush afterwards was adorable 😍.

Deita

My only criticism is "You really surprised me me there". This was amazing and I'm waiting for more of these two (hopefully sooner than later)!

721shadow

pleaseeeeeeee don't sink this ship ! I'm all for it 🙌

Epocseer

Yes!!!! Also that last panel, fucking sent me 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Widil

I love how it looks like one of the most « true » love story of TRW. It’s like they were meant for each other but the stars were not aligned so far. Makes me think of Han and Leia.

Mark W

I get the feeling that Elianna is a bit of a pent up volcano, but her need to follow the rules limits her ways of venting off pressure so to speak. We might just be getting to see her erupt in the near future..

MstrJerby

Lul her nipples are hard

Slim

You definitely subverted my expectations with this scene. I was expecting something to go wrong.

Jon

Im Kayden right now. At long last lol

HungryOuroboros

I'm glad Kayden is happy and not jealous :)

Phil Token

Hot kiss and lots of excitement from both of them love the page

Chris Davis

Awesome Page, Rein! I love how you show that they are both aroused, but are non-chalant about it. I'm also happy that Kaiden is happy for his best friend! Curious where they'll go on their date?

ScuzzBucket

okay I was expecting Elianna to be mortified at her lack of decorum instead of giggling at what she'd just done, lol. Her giggling as a result is definitely adorbz, though.

ShadowSkill

Did we just see an in comic Doppler Effect?

AJ

I think we all feel a little like Kayden in this moment

Merjia

Kayden is exactly me right now omg. 🥰🥰🥰🥰💕💕💕💕

Squid Hills

Gawd dayum. I totally called it!

Slaughterbug

Kiss looked hot. And the lip bit was *chef kiss* Sooo.... will this be eliannas first date... ever? With a willing boy...

Vylon Delta

I mean I’m VERY impressed with Eliana’s character growth, but she’s just gonna leave Derrick like that? Gonna have to revoke some respect points 🫤

Vince

I am… intrigues and aroused

Graci

For a second on the previous page I thought Elianna was going to Knee Derek in the balls for his erection, but I'm pleasantly surprise to see this going so well. Also as usual, expression are amazing, and the lip bite... amazing too, specially being the first one!

Mr. Pengo

Loving the subtle dribble down her legs lol

Vince

Also i love that they’re smiling at Kayden

sharpgladius

What if we kept a healthy monogamous relationship that didn’t have to crash and burn as sort of a contrast to all of the rest of the world.

sharpgladius

Like, nothing wrong with the others in the comic but it’d be cool not to have this one implode and we could see healthy relationships in both practices

Reinbach

Elianna won't go down that easily I'm afraid! XD

Reinbach

Beats Morgan the cock biter I suppose. XD

Reinbach

I hate when that happens. I fixed it of course but the flawed version was what was sent to everyone's email. X(

Reinbach

This ship is just getting started! :)

James Benthall

As a weeb myself I’m just hype to see one in action

Reinbach

Hey thanks for that comparison! :)

Reinbach

Glad to not be out of surprises yet then! XD

Reinbach

Oh yeah he's been waiting for this one. XD

Reinbach

Well with Tenma she was mortified that she lost control of herself. In this case it was more like she gave in, rather than lost it.

Reinbach

She used to date a lot before her lewdness crusade started, but yeah this will be her first one in awhile.

Reinbach

Hey she's just as aroused and she's enduring! XD It's just not quite as obvious on her.

Reinbach

Not a bad state to be in! :)

Totes Not Thea

There also seems to be something dripping down her thigh! ;-)

Rickled.Pics

i saw this in my phone the other day, but now that i logged onto patreon through my PC for the first time in months i can see it in an upscaled resolution. and i just noticed she's dripping. now i wanna go back and see the rest of the story .