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Thanks for waiting an extra day everyone! I think I'm finally back on schedule now after a very hectic week.

With my stated goal of wanting to fit in as much of the cast as possible in this chapter, that means I'm going to be bouncing around a lot, especially since we're still in the beginning here. But we will be coming back to Abbey.

I wanted Elianna's swimsuit to be as anime as possible. I thought about maybe having her in just the stock anime swim uniform but it was too plain for someone looking to show off for her new boyfriend. The Nami bikini from One Piece won out in the end. Meanwhile Kayden has to wear a label because at this point I'm concerned that he might read as a flat chested ( i.e. too young looking) girl otherwise. And Derek is just dressed for practicality.

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Lord Washington

Damn it aliana, you made me love you for wearing Nami’s bikini, but then you went on to do everything we all get annoyed with about you XD

Jon

I love that Derek even in post-Elianna protection aint taken no chances surrounded by all that water just waiting to drown someone.

Squid Hills

Gawd DAYUM, Kayden! It's a good thing he's on that boat. If he was on shore, looking like that, he wouldn't last a second.

TheFirstSword

Derek dressed like a man who has faced near-death one too many times.

jubs

Proofreader here again: Could be a stylistic choice, but the word is "weird", not "wierd". =)

Woody

Only one life jacket for Derek? Living dangerously.

llCDll

God this page was the page that kept on giving, obviously the first four panels had a lot going for them, then I noticed Kayden and was very appreciative, then saw that life jacket and laughed out loud. Great page

Slaughterbug

Derek knows life jakets are important when his very presence may sink the whole ship. Lol.

Slaughterbug

At least its the biggest one

TexasTies

Me wishing I was Abbey. Also, props to the Nami swimsuit. I recognized it immediately.

Sorrow

@Abbey, same bro, same

el_zilcho

The New Terrible Trio, featuring the sexiest prude ever, her loyal femboy sidekick, and the man who puts Murphy’s Law to the test!

el_zilcho

At least Elianna has a couple flotation devices too

Reinbach

Changed it it, thank you! :)

CumFntn

Elianna's inevitable sex scene is going to be utterly depraved, isn't it?

Stavros

Ummm, where's the post gone? I cant see it.

NKL

Great action:) Good pick for a yacht design, fancy, but not outrageously expensive, really gives a good idea of how wealthy Eli’s family is. And I think Derek would need a bigger vest :)

Minivet

Now I'm wondering, are Switch or Halver invited to this party?

Minivet

Also, could Elianna's parents have really promised to her with a straight face that the party would not have orgy qualities?

StonesThrown

Doesn’t Derek fear the sea racoons?

Reinbach

Switch and Halver will be there for sure. As for Elianna's parents, they technically aren't at the party here. They're on a boat trip that happens to be nearby at the moment. XD

Reinbach

He'd still have never set foot on that boat if his living good luck charm wasn't with him. XD

Reinbach

I thought about putting floaties on his arms too but figured he didn't want to look more ridiculous than he had to. XD

Reinbach

He has the scars to prove it! XD

Reinbach

Not with Mary on the beach! :O

Reinbach

I guess he does look like a fed from the neck up lol. XD

Reinbach

Ain't it always the way! XD

Stavros

Working again. Was it just me?

Minivet

Ah yeah, it didn't occur to me the promise was someone else's (the mayor's).

Woody

I was thinking "helmet" to protect against an eagle dropping a decapitated moose head on a random person, again.

Jariah Synn

Elianna looks fantastic here.