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Having a chapter take place during a party that the entire cast is attending sure is a rare gift to scene pacing for me. I can bounce to other characters whenever I want without having to set up the where and why they happen to be going at it. I can just jump straight to the action here, and save the talky bit for the next page. And it's my experience that expository dialogue is best delivered by sweaty naked women whenever possible.

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Malcolm Tent

Is that Miles and Liz? Because if it is and its not permanent Im betting Casey is going to be steaming to introduce Liz to Royce lmao.

Slim

Oh no, the umbrella blew away! How will Luka survive? 😱

SpiceofVice

Miles you lucky duck. Also Gold star on the sweaty looks for the hair.

Slaughterbug

Are they fucking in a portable sauna?

Alejandro Garcia

I guess the maids weren't strong enough to keep a hold of that parasol

Chris Davis

No, I'm pretty sure it's Raina and it makes sense since those three have gone at it before...

Woody

Tents with their flaps closed get stuffy even if empty. Add three people engaged in vigorous activities, and yeah, one-use portable sauna (they don't clean well, either).

Karmagik

Having a lot of stuff happening can definitely be a benefit when it comes to cut-aways. It definitely has it's drawbacks too, though. Keeping track of where everyone is, and weaving it all together can be a pretty big task.

Woody

Side-note: the toughest job in town is probably the dry-cleaners, but it is probably the most profitable.

Vylon Delta

With the amount these three go at it Casey gonna have a sibling and/or step-sibling (🤞🏻🤞🏻)

llCDll

I think Kayden forgot about that banana in his pocket...

Squid Hills

That tent is gonna smell like the monkey house at the zoo.

Lukas West

Hope Sylvia gets another chance to propose

NKL

Now that’s a pleasant surprise. Also, RIP parasol.

Reinbach

That thing never had a chance! XD

Reinbach

Miles may have grown to complicate that endeavor! :O

Reinbach

Right you are! I'll do my best and feedback is always appreciated as I go.

Reinbach

Well the small one wasn't, anyway. XD

Reinbach

I can tell you right now that first thing on the next page the women will be complaining about the heat. XD

Reinbach

Thanks! Half the time spent on this page was on the hair! :O

Reinbach

I imagine her hissing and scurrying to the shadows where she belongs. XD

Reinbach

It is meant to be Raina, yes. But she does like pretty different with her hair being wet.