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This Romantic World Page 21 (Patreon)

Published:
2018-06-15 01:56:23
Edited:
2018-06-15 05:44:08
Imported:
2026-06

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When I start writing a scene I rarely have one definitive end to it in mind. Of the ideas I had, I settled on the one where Mr. Birch gets punished and I think it feels right. I decided to keep his wife's appearance ambiguous for now, as I may want to come back to her some time if I get any good story ideas about a cucking milf who wants revenge.

Meanwhile so ends chapter one! I'll get the PDF for the $5+ tier uploaded this weekend. Hope you guys liked it, and I'm looking forward to catching up with the other girls in the coming pages. 

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Comments

Slim

Lmao

Dantels

GLad to see this guy punished. He just struck me as skeevier than your other guys.

Tukaro

WOMP WOMP

Bob Fink

Some body's nuts just when into a vise and his wife holds the handle. :-)

Lord Washington

I imagine Parker is gonna start questioning how much she can trust people after this.

ScuzzBucket

I like how obvious it is he's utterly screwed. Just from his facial expressions, I get the idea that his wife ain't the forgiving type :). Great faces here. And I like how his wife's foot is all we need to see. Great composition there! Nice Chapter so far! I like how we're kind of teased and wanting more- one blowjob and one sex scene, with a LOT of characters we haven't seen get fucked yet! Plus the whole Lydia/MaleSwitch thing!

ScuzzBucket

Yeah, something about his smug little grin when he said the "I expect you to be naked" thing made him seem like a creeper. Also, you can't have sex with a teenager 1/3rd your body weight without looking like a weirdo :)

Reinbach

I do want to have some skeevy guys to contrast the nice ones in TRW, and maybe have a few that fall somewhere in the middle as well.

Reinbach

That's the thing about her though: she never learns. Not with new people anyhow. She wouldn't be dumb enough to trust Mr. Birch again. But if someone new came along slinging the same bullshit, she'd fall for it again. she always assumes the best in people until she's proven wrong at least once.

Reinbach

Glad the beginning is going over well for you! I'm excited for the next chapter where I finally get to have some of these characters share scenes.

ScuzzBucket

Yeah, it's the tricky thing with huge casts like this- you kind of have to introduce them in small groups or nobody "sticks" with audiences. And in your case, it's a PORN comic, so people will inevitably get impatient and want to see people get drilled, too! And heck- I think you've only revealed something like 2/3 of the total new characters! We still haven't met Courtney, Holly, Jane, Derek or anyone else I'm forgetting!

S.R.R115

Here's a hot idea. Why not have the wife corner Parker for some girl girl time? Turn the tables a little so she gets to enjoy Parker and get back at her husband? Just a hot little thought :)

Reinbach

Not a bad idea at all! Sounds like I'll have some options to consider if I bring Mrs. Birch around again.

Reinbach

Thanks! I'm trying to get better about color balance.

Kudos707

I hope his wife goes hunting at the high school hehe

Reinbach

You mean for dudes to get revenge with? I would like to have an older girl/younger guy couple sometime. Might be an idea.