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This Romantic World Page 189 (Patreon)

Published:
2021-04-22 17:18:58
Edited:
2021-04-23 11:11:05
Imported:
2026-06

Content

I'm aware that most of my readers aren't here just for the smut, and that world building is an important part of the TRW package. But I still wonder if I'm pushing my luck with an update that's fifty percent inanimate objects with only zoomed out shots of fully clothed women. Did this little interlude work for you? Or was two pages too long a break to take in the middle of a sex scene? I'm always looking to improve how I pace my story, so feel free to share any thoughts you have on the matter. 

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Comments

Indigo Haze

That sign has been the best part so far.... ahhahahahahahhah

MechaBlerd

The raccoon just adds character.

Pyro

I'm actually more interested in the story than the sex scenes. And i have a question : Did you choose the name Castlewood because of this pun ? Because it's pure genius xD

Kudos707

Literally walked past the opportunity to called it Lood High School

Reinbach

Cool! Good to know he's going over ell so far.

Weber Jo

Don't worry. I really care about the story. The sex scenes are very nice, but I'd read it even without them. Your characters are just that endearing

Reinbach

I wish I thought ahead that well lol. The name comes from me Googling a list of sounds with suggestive names to help give me ideas, I think there actually is a Castlewood out there if memory serves. I picked it because "Castle" is (or at least was) the name of a chain of sex shops in Washington state. And the wood part speaks for itself I think. XD

Reinbach

Couldn't resist the urge to spell it right! XD

Jariah Synn

Oh my god the lulz here. Also: NO NOT THE BEAR!!!! We're missing the Holt Dickening! Cut back immediately!!!! God that sign so accurate 😏😂

Slaughterbug

I gotta ask, was the "my doing iz king" Jane's doing? Seems like her kinda prank.

Nikuthulhu

I definitely appreciate the world building. It's at least one third of why I love this comic so much. 1. Great art/sexy scenes. 2. Witty writing. 3. World building. It's good you check in, though. It shows you care as well. 👍

Bob Fink

That sign Rocks! Fits the school to a T. :D

Bolas000

I like the pacing. It's a bit like GoT's "sexposition". If you're going to dump a lot of info, do it while there's banging.

MAR

Nothing wrong here, though I wouldn’t mind if Victoria wanted Liz as a snack while waiting.

Giuseppe

These types of pages are awesome. The banter between characters and subtle details you add are fantastic!

GregD

I love this page. I love the humor. I love the other principal showing up Max. I love the heated talk while fucking happens off screen. I think it all works.

Marty

Given that everything that comes out of both Principal Redcliff and Liz's mouths are absolute gold, I don't mind in the slightest that we've taken this tiny detour. Plus, the image of that ramshackle, broken down, and perfectly on point sign is too funny not to laugh at

Marty

Not to mention the puma (or giant spotless ocelot, if you believe Redcliff) on the sign as well is just perfect lol

Devon Woodrup

It's kinda jarring a lil. Gives an impression it's not important somewhat

HungryOuroboros

Honestly, for me your writing is the real draw here. Your dialogue has always been god-tier, your characters have always been extremely engaging, and your general story building has really improved since I first became a fan (a little while after Switch was first pirated to e-hent*i). The art has always been great (though it's been a real treat to watch it improve with time) but it's your writing that gives it a life that makes both the erotic and non-erotic portions so engaging and memorable.

eF..cz

Not a slightest problem, so far i hungrily swallow every page. As time goes on, the ones which are not comletely sex scene-y maybe even more. And 10 points for the sign, none shall even think about repairing or replacing it.

Hooligan Mulligan

I didn't even realize the raccoon the first time i was reading the page.

Ranger Bumblefuck

Casey spray-painted that middle finger didn't she?

ScuzzBucket

I love the raccoon, though I wish this interlude didn’t have to interrupt THIS sex scene, to be honest.

Reinbach

Good catch! That is indeed her signature middle finger. :)

Squid Hills

Wait... is that the same raccoon that savaged Derek in that Q&A from a while back?

Dorian Alton

Now I'm curious as to why Elianna's first efforts weren't to replace the sign... Or whether they were, and the sign just always gets back to this state within a week or so.

Emmett McMullan

I totally love this page. The laugh of the sign and the raccoon are 10/10. Liz is the greatest

Slim

Jane doesn't have a dong so that prank wouldn't make much sense coming from her. I could see Zane doing it though.

Snizzlefit

No matter how pornographic a series is there has to be downtime between sex scenes. Especially if it's a long running saga like Switch and TRW. Taking a few pages to show things other than sex and perversion isn't just a good idea, it's downright necessary for the pacing of literally any story. Regardless of what other people might say you have to show these characters doing things other than having sex. Otherwise they're not going to feel like characters and the world will feel shallow and unreal because it's entirely one note. There's certainly a balance to walk with how many pages you devote to non pornographic scenes but I hardly think you've crossed the line into too many. In fact I think you could easily add another couple pages in these interludes without missing anything. 99 times out of 100 your writing is on point and the comedy rarely if ever fails to make me laugh. So seeing that side of things more often would not be an unwelcome change.

Captain Walker

"The sign is a symbol-- nay, an EMBLEM -- of a deeper systemic problem at 'Castle-lewd High'!!" or something

Naelyth

Lore is important ! Take the time you want to develop it, we're here for that too :)

Lukas West

Come fore the porn, stay for the plot. As much as I do love the sex, I LOVE the character driven plot and jokes. It helps us see these characters as more than drawigs and want to know them more and see them do more. So don't feel bad if you take too long between sex scenes. We can wait for sex and we love seeing these character fumble through life :D

Reinbach

I figured it would be one of the football players, Zane or maybe Jeff, he's more of an asshole. XD

Reinbach

Thanks! That's one of the upsides to weekly updates, I have plenty of time to read the room and course correct if need be. :)

Reinbach

That is a big bonus to porn comics for sure, exposition is less dry when nudity is involved. XD

Reinbach

Those would be two very tall ladies going at it there! XD

Reinbach

I guess I could see that. It never occurs to me personally, since everything takes so much time to draw, I don't include anything I don't think is important. But in the future I'll try to think more about how it looks to everyone else.

Reinbach

Much appreciated! I'll do my best to keep it up.

Reinbach

Cool! I wanted to make him as subtle as I could. Originally his "hiss" was a lot bigger and had a dialog bubble, but I toned it down so he stood out less.

Reinbach

Elianna would probably focus on the sign AFTER she solved the fundamental perversion issue. In the meantime I imagine her muttering to herself that "lewd high school" is the name this place deserves. XD

Reinbach

Hey great! Thanks for sharing! :)

Reinbach

Thanks for sharing then! :)

Deus

OMG, that third panel is so good! I think the racoon really takes the cake. XD

Lukas West

Something tells me Max will be holding a meeting to try and make the school better now. Poor Max.

Chris Davis

The Sign makes me think of an '80's Sex Romp like there were so many of back then. Awesome! I see nothing wrong with having an interlude now and then. Also, I love Liz in the background, supporting her Principal!

Reinbach

Glad to hear he's got reader sympathy! :D