Home Creators Posts Import Register Favorites Logout

Content

I tried to think of a way that two close but very competitive friends would initiate a sexual encounter, and a countdown just seemed to fit Warren and Morgan. Meanwhile I'm trying to think carefully about how Morgan would react as this scene goes along. It's a tricky thing to write, for me, anyway. On one hand she's got some real sexual experience behind her, but she's still about to take a big step for the first time, and I want to convey some of the nervousness and curiosity that might come with that if I can.  As always, I'd love to know what you think, and feel free to share any pointers if you have them. 

Files

Comments

GregD

You're doing great. These two are adorable. Maybe some variant eyework, as Morgan seems more intense than vulnerable, but that also totally works for her. Maybe some lip biting. But I am here for this.

NomadicWanderer

1) Morgan's tits look fantastic here. 2) Warren already with some pre-cum.. dude is obviously worked up, and can't blame him. 3) Will be interesting to see how Morg's going to react to sex with someone she likes for once. So far, liking the awkwardness, even as she took off her top. 4) Happy that Morgan decided to keep the glasses on. Hoping it plays a part of the "finish", if you catch my drift :). Great page!

Darryl Williams

Seems accurate, at least. From personal experience, guys at least moderately endowed tend to get this weird illusion that even the mere sight of their dick is something that shocks and amaze. The reality is, at best, mild, pleasant surprise? Now, if the next thought Warren has isn't already "how to get my hands/mouth/etc on those primo jubbiles" I'd be worried about him. We left 'appropriate reluctance' behind last page, and those breasts sort of demand a response. And penises *are* super weird, the instinct to just kinda poke 'em a bit seems totally realistic. Does make me wonder 'exactly' how closely she's been inspecting those pictures Holly posted.

Lord Washington

I love the tension and years of buildup for this.

ScuzzBucket

GOD Morgan has beautiful breasts. Just perfectly sized to be substantial yet still perky. And seeing her lean over like that gives a fantastic view of them as well. Lots of epic close ups of her face, too- her expressions and the way that long hair frames her face are rad. PS her hair should get even LONGER to be even more spiffy.

Jariah Synn

OOOOOOH boooooy! Starting off slow and hopefully going to burn bright. Hope this brings them closer as friends.

Izagi

For a friend Waren look verry ready for Morg ^^ !!

Squid Hills

Morgan is like a cat toying with its prey. She gonna bite that wang.

Slaughterbug

Morgan is so cute playing with his cock like that. Can't wait to see what else she does with it.

Kyman201

Goodness. Those lips in the last panel are some of the most inviting you've drawn.

RenegadePhantom

Love their dynamic and loving this scene! Takes as many pages as you need with this, I'm betting this is going to get good and complicated. Also, personal sidenote, really hoping she keeps those glasses on;)

Chris Davis

I'd like to see the dynamic shift, where as they get into it, Warren takes charge. It'd be interesting to see how Morgan reacts to that. As you said, they're competitive, so seeing them reverse/flip dominance makes sense to me...Just my 2 cents worth..

Merjia

Oh my god. I love them. She’s so gorgeous too 🥰🥰

llCDll

this scene man. Chef's kiss

The BRM

Would be fun to find out that Morgan just likes getting straight up railed when she is with someone she trusts and can let go. Prefers being dominated and being able to let go.

WGDetective

Is this sword from legacy of kain?)

Iris

Morgan and Warren make me feel happy inside. And tingly

Pat Bryant

I think something "premature" is about to happen. :D