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Trish likes Bria, but all the same I think it would be fun if she just can't keep her bully nature in check from time to time. Meanwhile in hindsight it's clear to me that I took on more than I could easily handle in a narrative sense with this whole scene. It was harder than I thought it would be to juggle so many characters at once without the pace being dragged down. Naturally it's a relief to me that the parties are starting to come together here. XD

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Slaughterbug

Ok, now for the real question. Can literally anything calm elianna down?

Squid Hills

Trish doing a little gentle bullying just makes the scene hotter. Ellie, meanwhile, looks to be in the mood to do some more conventional bullying. Which, considering Morgan is totally into that shit right now, is gonna get super awkward for one of them.

GregD

Trish has gotta be true to herself. It makes sense.

ScuzzBucket

Woo Morgan titty! And Liz's breast being pushed up by Morgan's head! Also this is our first inkling of Morgan being attracted to Liz, which is my most forbidden ship.

Hooligan Mulligan

Maybe Derek and Kayden making out at that moment

Vylon Delta

What do you mean, “You people”?!

Anne

And hopefully going to my most forbidden: Morgan/Elianna

Anne

How is Bria still surprised that she likes to kiss dicks?

Anne

This scene is massively crowded, but there's something really special that's fine it of it. We're seeing a bunch of characters from different cliques interacting in a setting outside of school which is cool on it's own, but also really don't a kind of world-building that I'm not sure the series has before. What I mean is that the world-building normally serves to make things more expansive. New settings, backstories, kinks, relationships, motivations, and side characters all make the setting feel alive and varied, but also more loosely connected. Likewise, when the characters talk about knowing something about another through rumor you get the feel of this big, gossipy school in a full city. But this, with Elianna trying and everyone knowing she is, with Trish aware of Morgan and Liz without dismissing them (even while being a bully), and with the whole school not just looking to see a step site but this particular one out in living by their friends... it's giving these almost small town vibes where everyone knows each other, not just of each other, and it really fits the characters and seeing well.

HungryOuroboros

Kinda seeing Eliana's point here honestly. Looking forward to seeing how this develops :)

Merjia

Oh I love these two together. Also I have a friend who looks JUST like Bria 😵 🥵

Slim

Never expected Trish to be wearing white lace panties with a bow. Abbey must’ve bought them for her 😆

Olympian Comics

Getting some Casey vibes in how she gently teases Bria. But I have rarely commented love the development of Bria as a character and how you have drawn her.

Pat Bryant

Elianna is kinda making this all about herself, ain't she? Going a bit dark.

Reinbach

She may indeed have some buried affection there! ;D

Reinbach

Yeah if things got physical Morgan would like it. XD

Reinbach

That would, at the very least, distract her. XD

Reinbach

Hey thanks for sharing! Good to hear the world building part is coming across as intended. :)

Reinbach

I could see that, totally. Aesthetically I figured she should be 100% committed to the dainty lady look here. XD

Reinbach

Thank you! And yes it does seem like Bria is developing a type when it comes to women. XD