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Fan Fiction Story Time - Episode 7 - DOUBLE LENGTH! (Patreon)

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2024-05-09 19:00:05
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We're making these longer and reading more chapters!!! This month it's more My Immortal and Sonic High School. Enjoy!

Submit fan fiction for us to read! Just click this link ► https://forms.gle/b3ig5PEdagX9AxPdA

Comments

Delia McDade

We are truly blessed today with this double length episode

Hope Gilbert

just in time for my lunch 😘✌🏼

arrie

YIPPIEEEE

SlimeBinary

as soon as the notification hit me i yelled im so ready for this

Strawberry

Something to look forward too when I get out of work

Lyran

This is exactly what I need to get through the rest of my day :)

knocknees

YEEESSSSSS. I'M SO EXCITED.

AshAmphora

I cannot BELIEVE I forgot about triumelephantly. The pure joy I felt when Dan read it was something else

clockwork doodles

my favorite part was the main character essentially going "I started crying. he started crying too. what a little bitch"

Marissa Mason

You guys rock. This series is why I joined the patreon and its not disappointing in the slightest.

Rachel Fischer

Thank you, Dan for suffering through that reading. I feel like Im having a stroke just reading it.

Marissa Mason

I'm also where an MCR shirt today. Very my immortal 😆

Claire

“Abra Kadavra” is one of my favorite My-Immortal-isms

Lauren Dautrich

I like listening to these while I work and the "No, volfemort has him bondage, pay attention" bit had me screwing up my face in tears from trying not to scream laugh in the middle of the office.

Tyler George

I love this series so much! Thank you guys

Shelby Bird

Doing eyeliner while listening to all the misspellings of Dumbledore, entitles me to a purple heart.

Richard Lusk

God I want these stories animated so much. Nonsensically of course

Ellie

“really? are you sure that’s the analogy you want?” LOL

Kiersten

The way Dan said "No, Volfmore has him bondage" with such a straight face when Arin asked if Draco died is absolutely hilarious

Tegan

I also am coming to understand why My Immortal is so iconic... I thought the joke would get old after the first chapter or so but. I am riveted.

Lucas A

I think I pulled a back muscle laughing

Merry Merrymead

Oh yes. Please do this for 1000 years. It's so ridiculous and yet so comforting to listen to you guys. Such a weird combo! 😂

Charlotte Parker

As a writer ... it is literally painful to listen to this 😬 And yet it's great 😅

Reinmaker

Would love to see the 2 sequels to Garfield Maximum Speed be done

Min

Double length?! Let’s GOOOOOOOO

vaguetype

the editing is 10/10, y'all

Tom Small

I don't mind you riding this wave at all. Fangs guys (get it?)

Sarahmonster

What a blessed time to be aliv

arī the samurai

“masticating” is chewing, by the way 😭😭

Sarah Z (not that one)

This series brings me so much joy. Turns out there was a lot of insanity that I managed to block out and forget about in My Immortal, and this has been a great way to experience it all again. Hope y'all get to Legolas by Laura at some point, but I could ride the Sonic Enoby wave for a while!

Kailey Bosyk

Omg please keep doing the double length ones, it makes my whole day. My cheeks and stomach hurt from laughing.

Nyx

I love this series so much. It brings so much comfort, cozy relaxed vibes, and lots of laughs. Fangs guys (get it?)

Sara! Anne Frazier

My Immortal came out while I was up to my eyeballs in pharmacy school; I'd never even heard of it. Extra long episodes are gonna reduce my temptation to read ahead and going in blind has been a treat. Thanks 💜

User

Why does this feel like a punishment? lol

Buggy

This was amazing especially "No, Volfmort has him; bondage. Pay attention" which slayed me. PLEASE go back to Goofy and Pete I really wanna know what happens

Colleen Hiltonen

just me, a beer, and trying not to spit out the beer cause I’m losing my shit

Alyssa

This is my favorite series of all time I think I'm gonna throw up from laughing thank you (AN: an if ur a prep fk OFF!!1111)

Kalli Deines

Fingers crossed we will get a whole video edited for just the my immortal readings. I need it to be all put together

Sophie

40 MINUTES? :D

MM

“gamer words for homosexuality” lmaooo

GracefullyAutistic

Longer episodes?! My prayers have been answered! 😆😆😆 Can you guys finish the Goofy x Pete story next episode? And maybe read some other new stories that are shorter (like single-chapter one shot kind of stories)? Because the biggest reason why I was hoping for longer episodes was so that we can have more variety with the stories. I get wanting to read as much of My Immortal as possible, but now that the episodes are longer, you can still read plenty of My Immortal and then maybe read two or three (depending on the length) short stories. Full disclosure, I'm not sure if the submission I sent in was completely rejected, or if you just haven't gotten to it yet. I'm debating on whether I should submit it again.

Quinn_Spooples

Lupin was masticating to it might be the funniest typo in this whole thing, just the image of Lupin standing there just chewing at something

Christian Grimmett

Phew, these boys have NO IDEA what they're in for with Sonic Highschool. It's like the Evangelion of Fanfic stories.

Doktor Vem

This is both the best and worst thing on the internet

Christian Grimmett

Chapter 6 of Sonic High School is going to be the greatest moment in Grumps History

Kyah Fyah

This is the least comfortable comfy content I've ever experienced.

Thomas Garcia

Is it just me or does Sonic highschool sound like it's written by a deeply closeted homeschool kid?

Ryan Sutherland

Triumelephantly is the funniest fucking thing I've ever heard oh my god

A Walking Contradiction

The "author" of "My Immortal" confusing emo for goth is just as cringe as their writing. lol

WaveJam

Longer episodes are just what I need!

CobaltTJ

"Sonic thought Shadow was a fuck." Is the best line in any of these so far

nebuloider

"sandly" made my drink come out my nose thanks.

nebuloider

My god I should be in bed right now for work early tomorrow but I feel triumelephantly ! Thanks Grumpos.

Kiwi

Sonic Highschool absolutely feels like satire, no way it’s genuine!

Dan Bellacero

It's a hilarious story, but I'm genuinely lost and have no clue what's going on.

Rachael Dutko

this was an absolute treat. shout out to 'triumelephantly' and 'enistein'

MellonBaller

Have they read "Cupcakes" yet? I forget.

hannah

cried laughing several times during this, thank you grumps for making my day!! 👏🖤

Pancakes

If they ever manage to make a film adaptation of My Immortal, the costume design for Ebony better be PHENOMENAL

La Petite Spoon

They won't lack any detailed descriptions, thats for sure !

Pancakes

Right? No excuses, designers!

Ol' Biscuit

Can you imagine getting to be that costume designer? Absolutely unhinged descriptions, it would be incredible

Pancakes

Plus, the script is basically already written! You don't need to change the dialogue (to keep it authentic, of course) though the plot might need a few tweaks to make it somewhat more coherent

shamelessawong

fill us up with the long epiosdes, zaddies (im sorry)

Mary McCormack

this is my favorite thing in the inter-webs right now

Justin

so glad for the longer episodes, but would love for a little lightning round of shorter ones

AnonFromHr

I will give anything for more extra length videos PLES

Brian G.

I still think it would be worth getting one of the fancy bound versions of my immortal

Zakary Lorrain

So thankful for story time, and for the extra length story time 😻

Sean

If theres anything we can value in this crazy world, it's that Sonic's balls no longer itch

enderman

triumelephantly 😭😭😭

Smug Boi

I just have a small request, can Arin put those dogs away?

Nikki-John-Wicky

Read more My Immortal and you'll meet Tom Bombadil!

PunkFalcon

I live for this series. As long as I get My Immortal I'm happy 😭

Emma Mitchell

Fangs you so much for do0bling the lngth of these vids (get it) ;3

Michael Pirretti

Can we get more of "Sonic's Ultimate Harem"? That was some good stuff.

Beef

Thank you for all you guys do, even when it’s silly funny stuff like this it’s just nice to feel your essence

snazzy

everytime a fan fiction story time is posted it makes my whole month.

Nukin Futs

Arin said it. "I feel like My Immortal is gas-lighting me."

Anthony K

I can't wait for the grumps to read fan fiction that's been written about them

tizzer169

I have a small request, show feet

tizzer169

This is my second time watching this and it won't be the last

SatisfiedShark

There is no way the author of my immortal is not intentionally trying to make this as badly written as possible.

CSDX

Aww, Arin left out the best part of Roger explaining the voice direction. After the voice director was like, "Perfect!" Roger went in that deep voice, "You gotta be fucking kidding me." Like, I don't mind the deeper voice acting, but him saying that was hilarious.

Red1derer

Just my head cannon My immortal was definitely written my a horny, *edgy*, pre-teen. Sonic High school was written by another pre-teen to whom English wasn't their first language. Judging on all the butt and dick jokes, they're a boy.

mars

I'm so excited to listen to more! :-)

Yankochick Central

idk what it is but I really love the way Dan says “you might think I’m a slut, but I’m really not 😏”

Andrew Holyoak

God I love these. I'm so glad I'm giving these idiots 10$ a month to listen to them read shitty fanfics.

Yugo

I love "Dumbleydore"! it soulds like the shitty cartoon version! XD

TheNonchalantNacho

Probably the best patreon exclusive. I need to know how the Goofy fic ends 😂

Mal

The way Dan just accepts the insanity of My Immortal and keeps going even when questioned is immaculate

Heartistry

Honestly and truly, I wonder what the author of "My Immortal" is up to these days. 🤣

Fluff W0lf

I need the end of that goofyxpete fiction. It wouldn't feel right reading it myself

Kristen Kindle

Got the membership so i can listen to these while i work. very worth it

Sophie

I don't think they have yet :)

Da_Wynz

Normally I can fall asleep to Grumps content in a comforting way. I think this time my body is just shutting down. I think 'Ebony' may just be a psychic vampire

AirenMarie

Wait...so 'Lupin' (sp?) was *checks notes* chewing while watching 'Ebony' naked/dressed...and then the school "constipated" the camera...got it.

Katy M

So my theory on My Immortal is that it started out as a semi-sincere self insert fanfiction by some middle school girl. I say this because the attention to clothing and little "gothic" details is just so in depth that it doesn't feel like it was written by someone who wasn't into those sort of things. I was also a middle school girl around this time, and my (thankfully unpublished) self-insert Pirates of the Caribbean fanfics were about the same caliber as the early chapters of My Immortal. However, I think pretty quickly, the author realized that the worse they made their story, the more attention it would get. Thus they, and possibly a group of friends, worked to make the story get progressively worse and worse. I then think that the hate for the fanfiction spiraled a bit out of control, which is why the author suddenly stopped writing it and never returned to it.

folxlore

FLOWERS FOR ALGERNON 😭😭

Katie Bradley

The outfits in My Immortal would have been my dream clothes in middle school honestly. Lmao Also, congrats to Sonic for recovering from itchy balls!

Kayla

They stopped right before my favorite part with “Snaketail” I’m living for this right now.

Kayla

I thought SHS had surprisingly good grammar, so it struck me as a young native speaker who hadn’t worked out every grammar rule yet.

Kayla

exactly my thoughts! I added one to my cart.

Aaron S

No volfemore has him bondage, pay attention 💀💀💀

Aaron S

I agree. Also when I was an edgy middle school teen for some reason my fanfics often involved the protagonist being upset with the handsome man and the man pursuing them to make amends, which My Immortal is FILLED with.

JOEY

I don't know why but it makes me so mad that they keep calling MCR a goth band ☠ like blawg 😭 like "Omg yessss MCR is my fav goth band how'd you know 😍" I would die on the spot if someone said that to me

Xai

"STOP IT NOW YOU HORNY SIMPLETONS!" needs to be a phrase I adopt into my life regularly XD

Dakota Miller

Wait are you shitting me no way that blue-coat-yellow-boot mfer shows up

Nikki-John-Wicky

It's clearly a typo, like, the author meant to say "Tom Riddle" but effed up triumelephantly, lol

Nathan James Yuhas

This would lose so much if anyone else was reading it aloud. Dan has a certain special something that really brings out the author's true spirit

Narvré

Good to see arin showing feet.

Ana Cristina

I never thought I’d say this but I want to hear you read the goofy screwing 🪛 Pete

sethfullyclean

This is banger! They're only getting better and better! Keep it up, you PREPZ!

Munchman

"No, volfmorph has him bondage, pay attention" is one of the greatest responses ever.

Ruija Dreampool

God, I was eating while watching this, and I had to pause the video because I kept almost choking. 'Sonic thought Knuckles was a fuck.' "I am going to try for the football team." ... But he had a horn on his nose and that was good for attacking people in front of him. THIS TOOK ME OUT oh my god the juxtaposition of these bizarre sentences

Kyah Fyah

Espeo going "oh" after being told you can date someone outside the one night of a high school prom makes him my new favorite character. Just a dumb jock with a heart of gold

Code 2

I want more of this :(

Mars

I 've watched you guys for like 10 years and joined just now for My Immortal. Love!

Mia

How often are these posted? I need to know what they think of the end of My Immortal

Kyah Fyah

Is this a serious question? Its the patreon subscription. It's every month.

Mia

It didn’t seem to have a set schedule like “this day every month.” No need to be snarky

Doktor Vem

It's been a full month since this video was released, are we ever gonna get another installment of this series or is it like dead forever from now on?

Kyah Fyah

I don't think it has a set date. Just once a month. Nothing could stop them from getting to the bottom of Sonic High School and My Immortal

Isaac Harvent

Love the longer episodes! Since they're only once a month feels more fun to watch

Kristen Kindle

I hope this continues, it's very fun

SlimeBinary

bless y’all for making these longer you don’t know how happy it makes me

Everest

My immortal is amazing- I've never been so hooked into a story like this before.

Bugs

The “I love her for her body” line caught me so off-guard, I just sat there with a blank face for a solid two seconds before I finally fully processed it and fucking cackled

Scott Asche

I won't soon forget the line "you poser muggle bitch!"

INCREDABAD

stahp flamn da story u prepzz ᕙ⁠(⁠⇀⁠‸⁠↼⁠‶⁠)⁠ᕗ (get it?)

Brandon

Are we really pretending My Immortal is a real fan fic? There are a lot of them where you kind of can't tell how real it is, but this one is not hard to see. It's extremely satirical and intentional. I guess it's funny, but I like the one's that are genuine because that's why they are funny. KidSonic (Or whatever his name was) actually cared about Sonic getting laid. The integrity of this show is bankrupt, and it's probably why my life is so bad. Hopefully this comment will fix everything.

sard

they said like an episode ago that it was satire. they know it's satire. but it's considered the greatest fanfiction of all time, and it's still hilarious, so they're reading it. They're aware, Brandon.

Brandon

Obviously you are attuned to very specific versions of sarcasm and satire, because my comment was obviously satirical. Sard.

Brandon

You know what? Forget I said that. It sounds aggressive and I didn't mean it to. Thank you for telling me that they said that and then saying my name at the end for, I guess impact? Your writing style and communication is immaculate and helpful, and I love you and I'm in love with you. No further comment.

Bugs

Yikes.

Brandon

What a cool community. You've made me feel very welcome, and like I for sure want to continue to engage with you. Thanks everyone!

Dracula's Medal for Bravery

Brandon, they're not all doing research for their fanfic expose like us. Some of them are just trying to have a good time laughing at ridiculous things.

Kyah Fyah

Put some respect on the name of LilSoniq! Unless it's requested that you call them Lilknuckles.

Lesbionic babeyyy

I'm so glad my immortal was made in a pre ai world so there is no doubt a human made it

April

No matter how many times I hear My Immortal, it never stops giving.

Persephone S.

sounds like something a pozer prep would say :/

Frank DB

I love a fan fiction so dedicated to the source material that they change almost everyone’s name and character designs. I keep having to remind myself that Bloody Mary Smith is Hermoine, Vampire is Harry, and now Diabolo is Ron? Also, scars aren’t something you just grow out of.

Erryd Sho

I was having a smoke right when he said "Sonic thought knuckes was a fuck" and I almost coughed up a lung

PillowDragon

Sonic Highschool sounds like it was written by an 11 year old boy that has had a very bad upbringing

SKRUNTLETHEGRUNTLE

Who’s gonna suggest that one mcr fanfic about Gerard being the presidents son and dating frank in a mental institution It was my friends favorite but that shit was wild afXD

critter’s enrichment enclosure

a: i thought draco was dead d: * genuine look of disrespect * ... no, wolfmort has him bondage. pay attention the level of investment on dan's level is supreme. step it the hell up, arin

Nikolas

Y'all are as high reading these as I am watching them

Connor Strader

"I may be a student, but I am also a Satanist!" - Hargrid

tohster

Can someone please fucking animate this. Or can I just do it? (My immortal specifically lol)

RomaRosenthorn

Just submit it Ask your friend for the link

RomaRosenthorn

Uh, clearly, youve never had any scars

Frank DB

Yes I have, and sure, they may fade with time, but it’s not like they just go poof.

Kale Buchanan

I guarantee you, as a former maladaptive fanfiction reader, My Immortal is genuine :')

FuzzyOtterPaws

I was so confused what SBO in the captions meant until I realized later it was supposed to be Espio🤣

Maddz

Thank god these are getting longer, worth every one of the dollars 🤘

Lucas Llz

Knuckles is fuck goes hard need that on a shirt

Bogost

the way Dan said “you might think I’m a slut, but I’m really not” fucking killed me

Jumping Dragoon

My bed is a coffin and I dress it up in pink and black stuff. My coffin wears black combat boots. But it's not pale so I gotta put foundation on dat. Noe muh coffinz is da bomb.

DMAN

I'm literally just here for Dan's beanie

Happy Bear Buddy

I’ll be the little devil on your shoulder whispering “dew eet”

[chvd]

How did Draco jump out from behind a wall with ebony but also was in his room killing himself??

jeffery barker

i dont know if im just high but is the music getting louder throughout the video

Charles Watson

The author of Sonic High School has a way with words. A poetically terrible way with words.

Arin

we've reached the sweater saga...

Jenny Canigula

Love how she'll drop the cigarette slur before the fic even starts but REFUSES to type the word c-r-o-s-s.

SUPERSHASHA

I’m so glad “old Japanese man” Arin is here to stay.

Obsydian Black

I sincerely wish it was "u miht thing ima slot, n yood b rite."

Kinipshun

i love how at this point we aren't even bothering to spell anyone's names correctly anymore

Eadaoin Cullen

I would like to formally ask for your permission to steal this and use it all the time because fuck me that is hilarious!!!

possum mommy

i use the word prep as a slur regularly now

HAM_STROKERS_EJACULA

I’m binging these episodes while rearranging my room, and I almost dropped a shelf on myself during “SEE, WAS THAT SPELT WRONG?!?!?”

Sara Grace

Except one of the first times she used “cross(es)” to refer to her jewelry/nails (I don’t remember lol) and then after that it was c-r-o-s-s. Arin is right, she needs to work on consistency lmao

Chase Cardiff

Man, that girl was devolving writing My Immortal. Her spelling was falling apart

Crescent Minor

She also talked about cross earrings in Chapter 1. She really did. She was rocking crucifixes and the colour hot pink, then decided those things weren't goth enough. She seeeeems like kind of a poser.

Dustin Steinacker

Jesus Christ I'm literally stacking stuff from a ladder and that whooshing sound early in the Sonic story had me thinking something was gonna fall and kill somebody 😅

FAWKS News

I'm blown away by this girl's desire to claim she's a Satanist and then censor the word "damn" like it's worse than the slur she led with.

A. F.

Arin being proud of Charmy for saying "DO not hurt my feelings!" made me smile.

Leafiane

I haven't read My Immortal in so long I completely forgot about the gothic version of a song by 50 Cent line and I genuinely had to pause and laugh for a good five minutes at that alone xD

Checkered

Ummm Hagrid would be support staff. How dare. Totally different union.

The King of Tiny Accidents

50 Cent lowkey proved diddy killed Biggie & Tupac, he might also do goth covers of his own music

The King of Tiny Accidents

As someone who was once one of these people, it was majority *really* segregated white kids who learned about being goth from the internet and from like, brand loyalties. This is a “yeah I’m goth I watch onision” perspective on the concept. Weird sort of mix of kids who were insanely sheltered with no concept of actual human pain, to kids who were actually dealing with some pretty fucked up stuff but with no access to resources to process it beyond, like… this. Writing from someone who was mimicking the style and someone who was actually experiencing abuse were, at least from the kids’ perspective, impossible to tell apart (I’d imagine adults would have a better understanding, but I also don’t know who was like, looking out for kids in those spaces. Tbh idk if anyone is now either :/)

The King of Tiny Accidents

She used her life essence to make this story that’s why nobody can find the author. She’s immortal through the written word and the code now, like the serial experiments lain villain

Samurai

Not your username on TOP of all this madness and chaos LOL

Juice Caboose

Flowers for Enbonnihy- as if someone took the Clock Drawing Test of a severe dementia patient and made it into a story. That's what it reads like. That's what it feels like. It's perfect.

KeaveMind

This is 100% not serious 🤣 the sheer amount of extra mistakes and way too intense 'im a true goth' character are true gold

Krist (like 'wrist').

the presence of a gun just destroys me. WHY does she have a gun. WHY is it there

Dillan

She got it from Voldemort... for some reason.

Mr.Derpy

love your name lol

Shaurmiath

My favorite thing about My Immortal is the heated debate as to whether or not the author is sincere. There are so many things that seem too stupid to be unintentional, but then... I agree that it walks a very fine line. I would believe either explanation, honestly.

Anthony Delfino

"A C-R-O-S-S, there's no way I'm writing that" rewind a couple chapters when she talks about putting in her cross earrings hahaha

KIWI

Im starting to think she has dementia in her name for a reason