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Filthy Hitch Chapter 8 - Going on Dates + Surprise (Patreon)

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Hey babes,

I decided to give you not only one but two popular poll choices. You'll find deleted scenes from this chapter at the end of the doc, with a little commentary. 

Please let me know what you think, I am desperate for feedback. Yell at me!!! Please!!!

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Feeshie

Okay, since you are desperate for feedback, you get my random stream of consciousness responses today. I think I'm gonna mostly yell at the girls here instead of you, though. What the fuck did Shadow Weaver do to Adora????? Is she the reason for all the stress or is Adora just being Adora about whether she can kiss her wife? I love Adora spoiling Melog. I have my own theories about why they were instant friends but maybe it was just the fancy tuna after all. The fact that Catra's instant reaction to "Starla didn't like the horse" was to head into the stall is equally sweet and hilarious. Bonding with your accidental wife through pure spite is such a Catra choice. "I won't let him hurt you" feels like a promise you really can't make about a horse that BIT YOUR LAST GIRLFRIEND, though, Adora. Aww, Catra, look at you! Talking about feelings and shit! Catra so focused on the knives strapped to her feet like her feet don't have built in knives 😂 Oh no Catra. No. You are ON a date. Already dating your wife, which means your wife is already on a date as well. Oh no. "I didn't even know how it looked when I clicked with someone" Catra are you just going to ignore that?????? She didn't know before but she DOES NOW, do you think she's talking about the person who sold her the fucking pretzels, Catra? She is talking about YOU. This was a really sweet date and I'm glad to see Catra opening up some and being honest with herself about her own feelings. All the misunderstanding how they feel about each other is gonna kill me, though. They wouldn't be Catradora if they didn't make me yell "TALK TO EACH OTHER" at the screen a few times, though. Overall I think they did a relatively good job at communication here, but I just know that dating conversation is going to come back to bite them in the ass later. I really enjoyed the deleted scenes, thanks for adding that little bonus! I can see why you made the changes but I always love seeing those little extra bits that didn't make the cut. In real life anybody who creeps up behind me for a hug while I'm cooking is likely to get a reflexive spatula to the face and a rant about how it's hard enough to track three different cook times without their bullshit distractions, but in fiction? One of my absolute favorites. So good. It just feels so soft and intimate, I can't get enough. I'm such a romantic when it doesn't impact my day to day life in any way 😂

Anonymous

omg i love that catra exposed herself to the bff squad -1. i like the contrast of which adora is it? both? 75/25%? ARE YOU KIDDING ME??? she caught her cus she fell!? fudgeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee its beautiful ugh ugh ugh catra not wanting to get married and adora wanting more!? if! they! just! communicate! correctly! AND AND how dare catra even insinuate that adora dates while theyre married!! "Adora is such an idiot. Of course she doesn't deserve her. Catra would never be enough. Not for her" sometimes i wanna smack some sense into catra