Extended Progress Update: 20 September 2024 (Patreon)

Hi Returning Visitors,

Key highlights of this update and reminders:

• Remember these emojis (☕💕☀🚩) from our September Content Schedule? I recently finished and coded that section just a few days ago.

• Scenes in Turn the Page tease out a myriad of social dynamics! While also reminding readers of a particular moment in Chapter 6 of Book One.

• (I don't believe I've ever had a Starbucks?? 🙃☕Maybe 'partaken in' fits better there.)

• Currently within Book Two's overall plot outline, your Returning Visitor is at Turn the Page. I bet you'll never guess who's about to barge inside for a chat.

• Book Two Snippet: This definitely wasn't on A's bingo card for a Corvin family dinner!

I never knew people were so passionate about their coffee until reading blog posts about how to craft exquisite latte art—the precision and science. It's impressive! The reason for this reading on my part has to do with what can happen during your time at Turn the Page, not just the ambiance/realism of A. Corvin performing their job, but what it means for you!

What I wrote most recently is about 33k words.

Thank you for the many well wishes about my dad's surgery! 💐Caring for him took priority over writing for the start of the month, but since then, I've been able to complete a chunk of this chapter and find a better balance. My usual writing blitz is back underway! :D I did go back and smooth a few things in my files in addition to adding one or two specific variations for a few of you. Most notably, a scene where R is more hesitant if not kissed at the reclaimed mine in Chapter 2 and then an alternate scene with Mal after a dream depending on how affectionate you're being with them. Oh, I also added A reacting to solo Mal-mancers in what I wrote recently!

All of these little details hopefully let you have more fun while reading.

Some highlights of what I just wrote:

• Mal might visit for another 'drink trade' with A where your romance/affinity with them directly influences scenes.

• You may notice A's pouring technique to create the 'microfoam' for latte art can be shaky, if not nervous, with certain crushes and events triggered. (It's possible for Mal to express an opinion on these as well. 👀)

• Rarely, Mal will pull your MC into the kitchen for a private moment! 🥰

• All of this is then interrupted by a walkie talkie's crackle, except it's yours while A. Corvin is standing directly across from you. I debated on whether to make the ensuing conversation random or based on a choice of yours, but I went with your bestie tailoring what happens, so you'll better enjoy replays.

• There are four unique conversations among the Fernweh gang! 🌲

• You'll then get to contend with an unexpected arrival in Turn the Page.

And all of that^ is before I tell you I included a ridiculous (affectionate) amount of latte art designs with hidden meanings for you to unlock while replaying Book Two. It isn't simply pretty milk foam. ☕ Each one links to a unique exchange/interaction.

With how I write TFS, the smallest of things will have meaning/come up again.

Soon, I'll be getting into the locations I teased in our last Extended Progress Update. This particular chapter is an itinerary determined by your past choices.

There's still much on the horizon for our Patreon content, including 'Maladaptive Tendencies' (Mal's POV) along with S's sensual writing before we get into our alpha drop at month's end.

[Spoilers Ahead!]

Here's an excerpt from Book Two:

James and Reese

The pleasantries come to a sudden end when Alina performs a double-take, stepping over to the porch railing to watch the newest arrival.

"You invited him?"

A cloud of billowing dust accentuates the ritzy, black convertible at its epicenter that seems to be absorbing the waning sun rays. You've yet to see this vehicle, but it pulls into place on the Corvin's land with flair. Reese's speed eased up once the homestead was within sight, and he's careful to park right by your own car.

"A Verner?" Alina clarifies, disbelief cutting into how she typically regards her brother. Her initial surprise gives way to bafflement when James says absolutely nothing to contradict how this appears. She rests her hand on the rail again, clenching it, before Alina follows James to where he just pointed at.

The Corvin siblings need a moment alone.

Jane and Ruby

The pleasantries come to a sudden end when Alek performs a double-take, stepping over to the porch railing to watch the newest arrival.

"You invited her?"

A cloud of billowing dust accentuates the ritzy, black convertible at its epicenter that seems to be absorbing the waning sun rays. You've yet to see this vehicle, but it pulls into place on the Corvin's land with flair. Ruby's speed eased up once the homestead was within sight, and she's careful to park right by your own car.

"A Verner?" Alek clarifies, disbelief cutting into how he typically regards his sister. His initial surprise gives way to bafflement when Jane says absolutely nothing to contradict how this appears. He rests his hand on the rail again, clenching it, before Alek follows Jane to where she just pointed at.

The Corvin siblings need a moment alone.

James and Ruby

The pleasantries come to a sudden end when Alex performs a double-take, stepping over to the porch railing to watch the newest arrival.

"You invited her?"

A cloud of billowing dust accentuates the ritzy, black convertible at its epicenter that seems to be absorbing the waning sun rays. You've yet to see this vehicle, but it pulls into place on the Corvin's land with flair. Ruby's speed eased up once the homestead was within sight, and she's careful to park right by your own car.

"A Verner?" Alex clarifies, disbelief cutting into how they typically regard their brother. Their initial surprise gives way to bafflement when James says absolutely nothing to contradict how this appears. They rest their hand on the rail again, clenching it, before Alex follows James to where he just pointed at.

The Corvin siblings need a moment alone.

Jane and Reese

The pleasantries come to a sudden end when Alina performs a double-take, stepping over to the porch railing to watch the newest arrival.

"You invited him?"

A cloud of billowing dust accentuates the ritzy, black convertible at its epicenter that seems to be absorbing the waning sun rays. You've yet to see this vehicle, but it pulls into place on the Corvin's land with flair. Reese's speed eased up once the homestead was within sight, and he's careful to park right by your own car.

"A Verner?" Alina clarifies, disbelief cutting into how she typically regards her sister. Her initial surprise gives way to bafflement when Jane says absolutely nothing to contradict how this appears. She rests her hand on the rail again, clenching it, before Alina follows Jane to where she just pointed at.

The Corvin siblings need a moment alone.

Don't overly fret JR-mancers! A. Corvin can come around, just give them time. J's happiness is one of the most important things to them. (They'll be watching you.)

Thank you for your support. Wishing you all a lovely and safe weekend! 🥰💚