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[Alternate Text: A GIF of an adorable woodchuck chewing something. He is sitting in a forest.]

I swapped our ramble about J's truck to maybe hit you with a truckload of feelings? This comes from a choice where you'll be reacting to seeing your old tree house with J. Corvin. It's this option:

#Make a joke to undermine how much this means to you. "You must have had a lot of splinters."

Your Returning Visitor might try to deflect with humor after seeing the state of the tree house—how much care has gone into preserving/expanding it. I'll leave most of this scene's mystery intact, but it's precious how J attempts to joke around in an endearing way. 😭 They're naturally more so sincere/reserved, but this teases at lighter moments from your childhood along with how J tries for the MC.

James

James shoots you a bemused frown, parting his lips to say 'pardon' or 'excuse me' instead of calling you out for coping in a way that could hurt him. You refuse to. (Mrs. Corvin's watchful gaze flashes in your mind.) Before you can think better of it, you pull him into a brief, one-armed hug that he accepts.

"I like it, okay?" you mutter that into his flannel shirt. "Just it's—it's from the past—what I thought was forgotten, so… I'm going to be a little weird about it, but what you did wasn't. It was sweet."

You release him, exhaling loudly to be done with this part—the feelings. "Still, that's a lot of wood," you off-handedly note. "Trunks."

"A woodchuck would be jealous…?"

James's awkward yet well-meaning addition to your subject change pulls a laugh from you, which he smiles faintly at, happy to help.

Jane

Jane shoots you a bemused frown, parting her lips to say 'pardon' or 'excuse me' instead of calling you out for coping in a way that could hurt her. You refuse to. (Mrs. Corvin's watchful gaze flashes in your mind.) Before you can think better of it, you pull her into a brief, one-armed hug that she accepts.

"I like it, okay?" you mutter that into her flannel shirt. "Just it's—it's from the past—what I thought was forgotten, so… I'm going to be a little weird about it, but what you did wasn't. It was sweet."

You release her, exhaling loudly to be done with this part—the feelings. "Still, that's a lot of wood," you off-handedly note. "Trunks."

"A woodchuck would be jealous…?"

Jane's awkward yet well-meaning addition to your subject change pulls a laugh from you, which she smiles faintly at, happy to help.

(Also, I didn't know woodchucks were so cute?? I liked finding the GIF for this post. :D)

Comments

alex

NOOOOOO SICK AND TWISTEDDDD I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT CHOICE TO BE SO IN CHARACTER FOR ALEX "calling you out for coping in a way that could hurt her. You refuse to." "exhaling loudly to be done with this part—the feelings." Alex and Jane makes me so unwell.......... i need them to be best friends (or more? 👀) AGAINNN 😭😭😭😭

KiraaBear

STOP J IS SUCH A DAMN SOFTIE I WANT TO SQUEEEEEZE

galpal95

🥹😭🥹

dasburnfrau

Woodchucks are adorable. We get them a lot, and they just waddle around. J doesn’t waddle but still evokes the cute aggression feeling

Kimbo jimbo

I still want to learn about the truck but omg J 🥰🥰 we got a lil hug

ckl

...MC is going to achieve emotional growth because they don't want to hurt J Corvin 👏 incrementally, but still...

lacunafiction

Ooh, now I'm more psyched for you to read the full choice because this fits with Alex! 🥰This is about half of it. The MC starts with their minimizing humor (coping!) before thinking of Momma Corvin and their potential harm of J (as you and Kay said) which helps turn it around. There are many emotional scenes with J on Corvin land. I'm glad that they make you unwell now since there's more to come in regards to what J has gone through. Alex as a bestie or lover (👀) would be lovely! 💚

lacunafiction

💚🤝🥹 I'm just /waiting/ for your MC to unlock a particularly soft moment with her Detective that's around this point in the story, some TLC.

lacunafiction

I love that you get to see them waddle (🥹) around being such cuties! I think you once mentioned a bog in a previous comment, so I bet it's fun watching them flourish in nature. 🌲The closest thing I've seen to a woodchuck was a racoon being an acrobat on our bird feeder. J would smile softly at evoking such a feeling. (I agree; there's something about them that deserves a somewhat smushing hug. Maybe one day! :D)

lacunafiction

I'm happy that you're curious about J's truck! Tying in where it has come up in both books is my plan; it has neat symbolism. 🐎 While the little hug is precious, I bet your J-mancer might get even closer later. 💚

lacunafiction

That^ and the MC seems to be thinking about something specific with Mrs. Corvin, so... interesting. 👀🟦🐦 As you and Alex said, not hurting J is primarily why they're able to reel in this coping mechanism. I'm excited to share the full scene, but you'll be able to tell that there's a /vulnerability/ to J about showing the tree house that most Returning Visitors will respect. It can be rather emotional!