Alpha Luna Ch 5. Page 34 EDIT (Patreon)

After a second glance I couldn't shake the idea that I needed to rework the second panel due the change in dialogue. Originally the second bubble text  is what would go over the original second panel. But in the end the text there depicted the time when Luna was starting to become a loner and I felt that I needed to reflect that.

The original second panel was "ok" but it was linked more to an specific incident she had that she talked about in "Collie's Spirit", in any case I also think this art works better overall.

Please comment :)

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Leo