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A Life Well Lived (Patreon)

Published:
2024-12-05 22:40:28
Imported:
2026-06
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Ken Dahl

I would suggest you put some indicator of a time jump in a couple of places so that the reader is ready for it. As to the story itself, it is good but disquieting to me. I ready a story when I was in grade school about some kids that had their youth stolen and it kind of freaked me out.