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itsmetoo

For those who want me to continue, there is such a thing as cheese lasagna ;-) Let me know. If you do, you should let me know how the Merle/Merrill and James/Jamie characters are related for a new story.

Dennis Hager

Story possibility that occurs to me is adult Merrill going to teenage Jamie's home and initiating swap instead. Or both characters (Merle/James or Merill/Jamie) being in the same family and swap occurs before someone comes to pickup up the "teenage" one for date, outing with friends, etc.

Dennis Hager

Btw the idea that it might be caused by a phone app is interesting but not sure it explains why Merrill would be affected before he looked at it as well. Unless it IS magical in nature and Jamie is just enchanted to believe she sees something there.

Dennis Hager

There are also apparently several ways to make "bad" lasagna too. Had more than my share. lol

itsmetoo

Each Lasagna story is a separate story with similar elements. Why is it called Lasagna, because I needed something to be cooking that would take a certain amount of time so that a bell would go off and pot roast takes 4 1/2 hours. Lasagna takes the right about of time, about one hour. I didn't have a name for the story and so it became Lasagna. It was never meant to be more than one story. But as will The Elevator, once I get started on a theme it can expand into many stories.

itsmetoo

The phone enchanted was originally how I was going to do it. She was fed instructions by the phone and couldn't ignore them. But only she could see the instructions so no one could find her out by looking at her phone later. But I changed my mind while writing and decided that Jamie was a lesbian who wanted Merrill's wife. It doesn't matter.

itsmetoo

An adult Merrill coming to teenage Jamie's house demanding she take off all her clothes is a bit creepy. Not that I mind (I explore all angles of a stories), but it's also pretty standard. Maybe I'll look into that later. If more people request that, that will be a big influence on me.

itsmetoo

My next story I am about to write is Dessert Lasagna. It seems there is a such a thing and it looks delicious. I found a recipe, I'll try to include it in the story.