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So, since I’ve introduced the Collective in the last issue of Hexxet’s Corner I’m now doing an article about one comic in particular that has inspired me a lot. It’s called “Office Memo”, it’s from a user from the collective and it is quite similar in some aspects to my Office Party and it actually was a huge inspiration for my comic. So, if you like the main story of Office Party and are fine with mostly F/F content this comic is definitly worth a try. And if you have read it already in the past, it's already some years old, so maybe time for a reread? The story is still good! :)

Plot: Ms. Raven has had a subliminal System installed in her company’s office to ensure worker’s loyalty and that office rules are obeyed. The system is running for two months now and it’s time to see some results. Productivity is up high - moral as well. All workers seem to have become loyal to the company. So, all seems fine until a ridiculous memo arrives by mail, signed by management. Who has sent the E-Mail and for what reason? Also Ms. Raven herself is working at the very same office she has had the subliminal system installed to so… 😉

The comic itself is about 170 pages long. The control in it is done via memos sent by E-Mail. The office staff obeys these memos as they are under subliminal control to follow all the office rules. It’s almost exclusively F/F. Some M/F is hinted at, and I think there is one image with male interaction, but aside from that it’s heavily focused on sapphic pleasure.

The Story of this comic was done by Detrix from the Collective. And it turned out to be a lovely story I have to add. The Graphics were done by Sturkwurk, one of my favourite 3D-Artists. (Sadly, most of his original stuff is TG based, which I am not interested in. But he has already done several MC themed comics on commission, and all of those were super great!)

Now how can you find this comic?

Detrix is from the Collective, but “Office Memo” is already an older comic. So, you need to join the Archive Gallery. There you search for Detrix or Office Memo. In Detrix’s Archive Gallery all Images are dedicated to this comic. Jus start with the first page and enjoy.

Here is a direct link to the gallery. Note that you have to be logged into the Archive Gallery for it to work, otherwise you just strand at the login page.

https://hypnopics-collective.net/cpg132/thumbnails.php?album=5206 

But note, that this is not all the content. You can find the endings to Office Memo in Detrix’s new Gallery. Note that there are two endings to this comic. A good and an evil one, so to say. Here’s a direct link to his new Gallery:

https://hypnopics-collective.net/smf_forum/index.php?action=gallery;sa=myimages;u=3678;start=60

If you are interested in the 3D art used for these comics, you can find a selection of Sturkwurk’s Art on his Deviant Art: https://www.deviantart.com/sturkwurk/gallery

Furthermore, if you’ve read Office Memo and liked Detrix and Sturkwurk’s work there is a more recent comic from them as well. It’s called “Deep Space Morale” and can be found in Detrix’s new gallery at the collective. (Right there after the ending to Office Memo). It’s another super cool comic, this time about subliminal control on a spaceship!

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Drak Zul

I'm glad you like my stories. (I'm Detrix) I'm enjoying your stories and I'm glad I was able to inspire you.

Hexxet

I didn't know you were you! So cool! :) I'm glad you like my stuff as well. I really enjoyed your playfull style of writing - where there is always another wrench thrown into the protagonist plans to twist the story around :)

Drak Zul

I have nine rules for good story telling which I like to think help but even then there were some parts I only did because I thought the readers wanted (which turned out to be untrue). Sadly I'm a better writer than artist or renderer so I anything I produce I basically have to get someone else to do the visuals. But Office Memo was especially fun for me, I wanted a bit of a mystery so I made sure there were always several people who could've done it right up until we find out who did what. Also I liked to have the main character at least partially responsible for the situation so if/when it backfires it's all the sweeter.

Hexxet

I can relate. I'm really bad at graphical art myself. On paper I could not even draw a streight line. So, I'm very happy that I found Daz3D. There I just have to push some sliders and add some assets and it looks good pretty fast. It's an investment to buy all the assets and it's still work to do renders without clippings and get the characters into special positions, but it's systematical enough that I can deal with it :)

Jabba

Wow... so another excellent mc 3d crafter here... well, I hope I am not stepping out of bounds, but have either of you thought of expanding your base? One site that has a whole lot of good mc comic stuff is mindcontrolcomics... maybe you could join the site as an extra place for your work?

Hexxet

I could very well see myself doing a one-shot or one of my Magic Control series for MCC, and I would very much like that. I’m enjoying their stuff very much 😊. Though currently I’m at the limit with creating for my Patreon here and keeping my day-job. But of course, it would be real good publicity, additional income and I’d feel honoured to see some of my work on their page 😊 Anyway, I will probably do a little reorganising when my new long-term Comic starts and think about it once more then. Right now I’m all for bringing Office Party to a pleasurable ending, while planning ahead for the transition 😊 Also, my current dream would be to get around 450-600 patrons. Not sure if that number is reachable for me, but then I could start doing this as my main business and increase my comic production 😊

Jabba

Fair enough... but the idea I was having wouldn't involve creating new stuff specifically for the comics page, but rather using the stories you already have fully completed, and perhaps see if you can post a link to your patreon to lure people over for your works in progress and a chance to have some influence on upcoming stories. I can understand if that would be more than you would be willing to handle st this time, but it was just a crazy little idea of mine.

Hexxet

Well, I'd very much like that idea, but I doubt they would go for that ;). I think up to now they are having exclusive comics that are only sold via their membership.

Jabba

Seems that Sturkwurk is continuing his artwork in mindcontrol comics, in series such as 'bearing gifts'...

Jabba

Hmm, had another thought... ever try making a couple of your older stories into slideshow format and uploading it to xnxx.com? Not sure all the details of what it takes but I am sure they should allow you to link to your patreon from that site.

Hexxet

I think that's a really good idea. Those sites have a lot of watchers, so it should be really good publicity. And creating those slided videos is actually pretty easy :). I've done a post about this topic now --> Please have a look at the first Scene of Office party in slide frormat there.