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NEW VIDEO! Help me catch errors X3 (Patreon)

Published:
2019-09-27 03:09:32
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2026-06
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Hey everybody. I did a big ole' video about what "edgy" comedy means to me.

Wanna look and make sure I didn't mess it up?

Goes live tomorrow around... iunno 2pm my time tomorrow?

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Dave Chappelle used to be edgy. What happened?

This video is about Dog Whistles. Dave Chappelle used to be edgy

Comments

Siphedious

Since you asked... :p The Content Warning goes past about a second faster than I think might be ideal. I'm not personally a fan of the blank green screen or the blank black screen (especially when you're wearing a black shirt), but I imagine that's not the critique you're looking for. :p I don't know why, but anytime you moved off-center (during the Gamecube bit for instance) I chuckled. That trans-racial joke (his, not yours) made my head hurt, which may have impacted the rest of this critique. OTOH, I guess all I really have to say otherwise is that I didn't see any errors or such. Content-wise I didn't feel like I learned anything I didn't already know, but you and I tend to be pretty in sync about these sorts of things. Consequently, for me, the part where you were talking about watching Carlin et al. while growing up was more compelling. Anyhow, glad you have some real A/V equipment now! TL;DR if there were errors, I didn't notice them. Thanks for sharing the vid!

Muse The Husky

Per 23:25 camera is not a potato, but still looks like one. Be on the lookout for cameras disguised as potatoes. On a serious note found the video entertaining and thought provoking, providing new perspective on evaluating comedy and what it means to say something meaningful. Good work!

Rainshadow

Some hopefully constructive observations? The pacing of your voice isn’t constant throughout, but that may be by design. Other commentators in this format tend to have more even pacing which does make it easier to follow. I thought the transition to your commentary at 21:50 was a bit more abrupt than the earlier transitions. Those were noticeably smoother. That said, I’d say you have (yet another) talent for long-form commentary, and most definitely a perspective that people should hear. Hopefully this wasn’t too pendantic. :/

Ciarán Pierce

Fun to watch and ur face looked fine, so I wouldn’t worry about foundation if you weren’t wearing any