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FEEDBACK NEEDED - DSFSD 2 Kickstarter video (Patreon)

Published:
2023-07-27 18:07:32
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2023-07-28 22:42:11
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EDIT: Version 2 is up. Refresh the page and see if my edits have helped! I lowered the BG music volume overall, and replaced them with instrumentals everywhere but in the Album Preview section.

IT IS TIME to try and fund a new album and this one is a SEQUEL.  Watch the video and tell me:

-Are audio levels good? Anywhere startle you with sudden loudness?

-Is the information clear? Anything not make sense? Any lingering questions? Remember, when it posts all the kickstarter tier info and other numbers will be all around it on Kickstarter.

-Anything missing? Anything seem "off"?

It's set to launch September 1st!

ALSO I have THE T-SHIRT DESIGN. What do you think about it? Too sexy? Sexy enough? Does the text work as a joke or does it look like I just can't spell?REMEMBER. All Patrons will get a digital copy of this album for "free".

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Flop

How much money do we need to raise to get the original end lyrics of Blood Ritual? 🐇🐇🐇🐇 Asking for a friend

Rick Whitechest

Hyped for Nobody's Hero, that tickles my "surprisingly good, but memey" bone quite well.

Hachi Shibaru

Super excited! :3 I got a couple bits of feedback. First, I think the songs in the background while you are speaking could be lower in volume. It’d help to not have your voice blend with your singing. Perhaps it could be instrumental instead?? If you can? Otherwise just lowering the music would help I think. Same deal after you show the sample of the song and then talk about it. Second, I was confused a bit about the release you said in the vid. The way you worded it sounds like the album releases in about a month or two. But I see you mention here, launching on Sep. 1st. Does the album fully release Sep. 1st? Or just this kickstarter and the album comes like right after that? And third, for the shirt, I think “spyce” reads like “spice” instead of “spicy,” so maybe keeping that as just “spicy” if that’s the pronunciation you’re going for. Anyway, I’m super excited for this to launch! I hope it does super well! :3 I know I’ll be backing it :3

Ian T Gray

Ok, this is AMAZING. On all fronts. I’m stupidly stoked! Thoughts: Audio sounds great to me. Re: clarity, I second Hachi’s comment about the release date. Re: potpourri, maybe it’s just the encoding/compression for YouTube, but the left side of your guitar seems to be… flickering or something. It’s a little distracting; a reflection on it plus the green wall behind you? Not sure if that’ll be a quick "change the compression and you’re good" and you're good thing, but worse comes to worse, maybe just pixel blur it? Re: the shirt. I love the the design; v-sexy. Lol, but ditto Hachi again. I read it as "Spice Puppy," which could be a very cleaver reference to Frank Herbert memorial track which is as of yet to be unveiled? lol. If you wanna fuck with the spelling, which I dig, maybe something like "Spy-'C'-Pupy"? Lastly, if it’d be helpful, I can drop in the DMs a handful of print shops that do apparel printing. When I worked for SEIU Healthcare, we had a solid list of MBE/WBE Union businesses that we worked with for merch/printing/etc… Happy to share a few whose work I really liked. Most of them will be in Illinois, if that matters. If you’d be interested in working w/ someone whose business is a little “smaller scale,” I know two DOPE independent Queer silkscreen artists; one in Philly (Come On Strong) and one in Omaha (Plack Blague). They're both great folx & do exceptional work. Can't wait for the kickstarter to go live so I can send it to all my friends!

Laptev Tayshet

t-shirt not sexy enough seriously though, that is a cool design

Chunks fox

Looks good, makes sense and the information is clear.

Werewolf Detective Paw

Looking forward to this one a lot. Think the video was great. The sound balance seems better now. Also, once purchased, will wear that Spycee Puppy shirt every chance I get. Haha. 🔥 🌶️ 🐺