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When creating the story for ORS I realized that it was important to populate the world with all kind of characters to make the main character's environment feel rich and believable. I was aware of this fact working in GGGB already, but this time I knew not all characters had to be there just to provide a sexual fetish for the players.

Lena and Ian spend a lot of time in their work places and have families, just like most of us do. Those couldn't be simply presented as backgrounds, they had to have life added to them. And I would've liked to introduce more background characters to flesh this out, add another co-worker for Lena at the restaurant (she's mentioned at one point, her name's Samantha) and maybe other colleagues for Ian at the magazine or even at the gym. But my time and resources are limited and sometimes I have to prioritize which characters I will create graphical assets for and write appearances and interactions for, or I run the risk of stretching too thin and making the flow of the story and plot lines too cluttered.

This was the case when I came up with the Van Dykes, the lovely couple who run the café Lena works at. But same as with Robert, once you introduce these "background" characters you realize the potential they have (that's another reason why I try to be measured when introducing characters, because I end up wanting to develop sexy plot lines for them too). In this case, and considering how much people liked Arthur's character in GGGB, I saw in Ed good potential to introduce a somewhat morally questionable relationship with an older man for Lena. It's been already hinted at in the game, and I hope I can develop it satisfyingly, but right now I feel it can't be one of the main focus of the story, even though I have several ideas for it that I like. I want to flesh it out, but I can't let that take too much time off the other plot lines and characters, (there's a ton already!). 

We'll see how that ends up paying out as development progresses, but what do you guys think about Molly and specifically Ed? Let me know in the comments!

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SoloStudios

I'm fine with them being the nice(Somewhat creepy) married couple in the cafe. But I do think that right now it's very one sided on the romantic scale, at least right now. Ian has Lena, Alison, Cherry, Cindy, and Holly(Maybe his boss idk) but Lena only has Ian, Robert, maybe Jeremy, and Axel( but their in bad positions right now in the story)& Ed. Idk personally, I'm not looking forward to Ed/Lena relationship development, honestly I'm more interested in maybe Jeremy or Axel development

Sin Art

I like your idea :) maybe if Molly remains sick, he can go after Lena but more in a psychological way. Like have a shoulder for him and give hime a reason to go on like on GGGB with your dad.

Schnoofles

Molly's just the sweetest lady, though perhaps a little too sweet. Poor thing doesn't deserve Ed going behind her back to hook up with Lena. Now if both Ed and Molly were open about it or they have a mutual interest in Lena then that'd be quite interesting. They seem like such a loving couple that it'd be a tough pill to swallow to see Ed turning his back on what is essentially an entire life together.

Jean-Simon Bleau

I really like those characters they are adding life and a more mature point of view to the story. and yes I think a path like Arthur could be nice but also Molly could be the same for Ian. That was the only thing lacking in GGGB I think more mature female figures. And maybe introduce a pregnancy path along the way. Continue your great work, I love you games.

BloodyMares

I'm on the fence with Ed, he does seem to overstep the boundaries but I'm not sure if he's genuinely clueless or a perv. But I really like Molly. It's nice that Lena can have a motherly figure to talk to when her own mother was not understanding. The one thing crossed my mind. Van Dykes always wanted a kid, right? What if they consider a surrogate? Lena has money problems, right? This could be a way for her to get a nice financial boost in exchange for having Ed's child... On one hand, it's kinda creepy, realizing that he's the boss and all that, but on another, it can be a really altruistic act for Lena to help them have something that they lost their hope for. Also, considering that Molly's health is not great, does she feel sorry for Ed because he's still a virile man? What if she'd be happy if Lena was able to give some satisfaction to Ed? Having a cuckquean in the game would be something new.

Matt Gorman

I'd rather keep it platonic with those 2 and the MCs

B

I think the Ed character has great potential. Specifically for the eluded to morally questionable 'relationship' with Lena. I would love to see Lena using her sex appeal, as she somewhat has already, to get her way with him. It seems like, depending on the choices made, she can be the instigator in this herself or Ed could be a bit of a creeper. I prefer Lena instigate, but both options could be fun. At first this would probably be strictly to secure more hours/weekends at the cafe, stuff along those lines, but it'd be great to see it progress into something Lena does for the fun of it. I wonder where the Cafe story is going overall. It seems to be in quite a bit of trouble. Perhaps there is opportunity there for Lena once she becomes more financially established? She could become something closer to a business partner than an employee. Or more involved in one way or another. A scenario like that could provide lots of opportunity for fun developments. As for Molly, i don't have much of an opinion other than that i hope overly dramatic situations for her could be avoided and that the poor woman isn't dragged through the mud too much even in the most "morally questionable" routes. :P Keep her comfortably in the dark imo.

Breadloaf

The old ugly bastard angle isn't my kink so I'm not interested in that. The platonic relationships helped give some depth and nuance to both Lena and Ian so far though, so not every character needs to be fuckable. But if there's a planned potential relationship with Ed, people want it and you want to write it, sure. It doesn't diminish my experience since I can skip it.

Purple Lagoon

I'm not a fan of Ed going the Arthur path. But if something funny, kinky, lighthearted starts out of it, I might be interested. Some nice ideas have already been posted.

Julian Harper

I do like Ed and Molly, especially the interactions between Lena and Ed, and I hope you can explore that more. I see Ed as being the morally good (relatively) version of Arthur (corruptable but with Lena leading, instead of the other way around). One thing I do wonder is why Molly was off work, is that a subplot point coming soon? They are both very likeable and warm characters and do add to the overall completeness of the world Lena and Ian are in

David Inlong

I love Ed. In games like this, where I can be a female protagonist, I also go for the older male characters first. Knowing that you plan to do more with him is great news for me since right now only Seymour is the clear older male character that has a route for Lena. Hopefully, you find time to add these potential Ed scenes. 👍🏻 I also love a good "cheating" storyline.

Dashole

Ed would def allow some of the Arthur foil into the tale! I really miss the lecherous villainy that Arthur brought to the world!

Kev ooooh

Ed is my favourite potential pairing for Lena. The power dynamic between Ed the doting husband who lusts after a younger woman and Lena using her sexuality to wrap him around her little finger is hot. I want Lena to be the one in charge and Ed almost reluctant at first. Like she wants to toy with him if you're going down the flirty route with her, also Ed should be packing major heat in his pants but is unaware how to use it properly. I would prefer Molly to be suspicious of Ed and Lena eventually. Maybe noticing Ed is making decisions with his cock rather than his brain. E.g. giving Lena extra shifts if she 'accidently' shows some skin.

Loosey Goosey

I have extremely high hopes for this couple. Maybe she loves watching her husband dominate other people.

fortuna95

Eva, please involve them sexually.

Infinity

I think he should have a dark side like Arthur. Or he gradually becomes a sex fiend pushing the limits, because his business is in the toilet and it's his escape. Molly is doing something similar with another and they don't know but have suspicion, until they find out

Infinity

Molly and ian maybe