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This is the last WIP I had prepared on Chapter 8's scenes. Holly is always a challenge to draw, her body type and hairstyle are pretty unique, and her glasses, oh, how I hate drawing glasses. That means it's hard to find good references for her, and I usually need to add a lot of elements from scratch, not being able to fully reference the picture I've chosen.

Turns out picking good references for sapphic sex scenes is also pretty difficult. I have the feeling most girl-on-girl adult content is 100% percent created for the straight male eyes, and not that's a bad thing in itself, but most of the time it feels the girls in the pictures or videos are posing very deliberately for the camera, rather than "being into it" or into each other. That means most references I get are very staged scenes, lacking the physicality and emotion I try to  depict in my illustrations (I feel GGGB suffered a lot from that).

Now I try to be more picky with my references and take some extra time to create the images that I think reflect what the text tries to convey. I had the same problem (even harder!) for the Holly x Ivy/Lena scene.

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Ffr0v

You're the best Eva!

Ethereal Twist

Well, I already commented my approval on the discord in the ch. 8 discussion page, but let me just reiterate that I think you did fantastically with Lena/Holly. I've been waiting for it for some time, unsure when it would happen, but the quality of it completely justified the wait and has made me excited to see what else you will make for Lena and Holly. Hopefully there will be great variation depending on what Lena buys at the sex shop ;)

DecafHigh

Lena/Holly has been just great. Can't wait to see more of them! :D

Heidi

All the art in that chapter was top notch, but the Holly/Lena stuff was especially cute and sexy!

Dennis

Thanks for answering my question with a proper picture and explaination. Very interesting how you do it exactly. May I ask: how often did you redraw that first lines of the first picture? I would have needed dozens of tries without beeing successfull. But even if I succeded, I would never know when it is good enough - sounds like you sometimes suffer the same problem. A "downside" of beeing your own boss, I think. Having an art-director above you, you could sleep better knowing of his approval. Not that your arts would need any director, you are doing great, but having someone say "this looks right, move on!" could ease one's mind, couldn't it? "lacking the physicality and emotion I try to depict in my illustrations" - "take some extra time to create the images that I think reflect what the text tries to convey" You really suceed overwhelmingly with this! I really can relate to your characters visually, but even more so textually. The visual and "intellectual" side feel very real at ORS. Playing a new episode of ORS feels like meeting old friends. Many (but not all) other games only stack one senseless sex-scene after another or, if they do have a non-sexual dialogues inbetween, they feel artificial, redundant and boring. Some other do acceptable or good jobs, but in ORS, I really enjoy "listening" to some couch-talk with the boys and even rolled on the floor at "it wasn't me!". It sometimes even interferes with my initial motivation of playing an erotic visual novel ;) , but thats fine :D . Your hard work and talent(!) really pays of, you are even creating more real feelings than (most of?) all professional telenovelas and most of the popular books. "I feel GGGB suffered a lot from that" Never mind! You really did get even better, but GGGB did have a high level of it's own, better than most VNs out there. But really impressive, how much self-critical you are. Most other creators archive half of your art and never doubt their decisions. Maybe this is what keeps you getting better and better?!

WestDiddy

Hi I'm a new subscriber and wanted to know, in general when do updates come out? Thank you!

Brother Bethor

I have to say that the wait for this love scene was absolutely worth it. Everything was great: art and the writing itself.As Suricat said above, Holly highlights every scene she is part of. Eva, you have really done outstanding job with it.