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Continuing with the last post commenting Chapter 10 scenes, I have to start with Lena's Stalkfap photo shoot at the end of the episode. This was the last scene I wrote (aside from Minerva's add on in the final release) and it was one of the more complex set pieces. The scene can take place with either Ian, Mike or Stan, and Lena can use a variety of sex toys. I also gave her 3 options of attire, making the scene even more flavourful and customizable. It took quite some patience finishing it, but it wasn't the scene I struggled most with...

The club bathroom blowjob scene was also a very customizable one, since Lena can wear 6 different outfits and pick between 3 different partners (Ian, Mike or Mark). But the tricky part was that all those illustrations with multiple variations had to be animated. I created 3 frames for the blowjob, and experimenting with them, I discovered different ways to animate them, creating a smoother and more varied movement. I'm quite happy with the final result, for it's modularity and how I managed to squeeze all the potential those 3 frames gave me, but it took a lot of time and patience to draw and program all the variations. 

I wanted Holly's and Ian scene to feel sweet but also hot, as Holly slowly opens up to Ian, showing the player there's more to her than her timid personality might suggest. My favorite Ian x Holly scene still is the one in Chapter 7, but I worked really hard on that one and I believe it'll be hard to top... But right now I'm trying to develop their sexual relationship step by step in an interesting way.

Ian x Cindy scenes are always a highlight of the episode, and I didn't this one to be an exception. She's many player's favourite girl for a reason, and I try to reflect her beauty in all the art I create for the character (many of my favourite ORS illustrations feature Cindy). I'm also trying to portray Cindy's personality through the choices and actions in those scenes, and how Ian can connect or influence her if you play it right...

Lena and Jeremy's fling has been very fun to write, and the threesome with Louise felt like the perfect opportunity to keep developing it. Lena can be quite a bad friend here (let's face it, she's been backstabbing Louise for a while now) but Jeremy is a perfect outlet for her lust and a darker, more dominant side of her personality. All in all, this threesome felt like a breath of fresh air when it comes to character interactions, and I can't wait to add more threesomes.

And speaking of threesomes, the one between Ian, Alison and Jeremy was a long time coming, and chapter 10 was finally the moment... This scene was a real head ache, and I got stuck with it for a long time, halting my progress for a couple weeks. It was especially difficult for me to get into Ian's frame of mind in this scene, and it has many variations: Alison's relationship with Ian or lack there of, Jeremy, Ian's nervousness and failure to perform, or the fact that the scene can take place without Jeremy altogether. And, to make things more complicated, I wanted to make the scene as interactive and modular as possible. It didn't help that I felt stuck when the pressure to deliver the chapter was at an all-time high, so getting out of my creative block took quite some effort. 

At some point my mind got so tangled up I had to sketch up a diagram with the flow of the scene, so I could visualize all the moving and interlocking parts. As you can see, some drawing even ended up being scrapped, and after releasing the chapter, I had to go back and add an extra branch I had missed to account for. I also went back several times to this scene, revising, rewriting and erasing parts, trying to get it right. I'm not sure if I succeeded in the end, but it was a big relief when I was finally able to move on and continue developing Lena's part of the chapter. Did you like this scene, or do you feel I wasn't too successful with it? 

Also, I finally got around answering all the questions in the Q&A, so if you were waiting for your question to get a response or you're just curious, check it out!

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Fckngpics

who wants cuckold scenes, between Ian and Jeremy, click like 😁 congratulations eva for all your work

Ai Taka

My favorite scene in Chapter 10 is Ian, Alison, and Jeremy

Brother Bethor

I love the fact you made all girls different. Each one of them acts differently, and have various dislikes (ie.: Cindy doesn't swallow but Lena, on the contrary, she loves doing that etc.). Cindy scenes are as always amazing but for me Holly stole the show this time. I wasn't aware that Alison's threesome was that complicated. Overall, this chapter is awesome.

Fleur-de-lis Fiction

Looking forward to replaying Ch10 with the various arcs. Hope to see even more depravity in future chapters from Alison! :-)

DD

I really enjoyed the Ian/Allison/Jeremy Scene, and I was able to observe it in several of its variations. I could definitely feel the amount of dedication that was poured into each iteration, so I believe you accomplished goal! My only critique was that it was a little too short. But I think it was the perfect catalyst, to set off even more interesting scenarios. I also want to applaud your willingness to delve into what some players refer to as nasty ‘thing’. A nasty ‘thing’ beginning with an N 😆I personally like the possibilities of the route involving Ian, not sharing Allison with Jeremy up until their threesome. This has some interesting possible outcomes! All of which certainly create intense emotions, and some interesting questions. In the case of Ian finishing too soon, and allowing Jeremy to ravish Allison. She doesn’t appear to have achieved orgasm, and is left unsatisfied. But she definitely experienced something deep and intense from Jeremy. Will she want more? Does Ian want to see what happens if she does? Or does she decide to go with Jeremy, despite Ian’s wishes. I would think in the case of Ian and Allison’s dating route, her going behind his back would appear out of character. But I’m sure Allison’s curiosity would linger… As always, keep up the excellent work Eva!

Spidey96

I loved this scene I hope we get a chance to do it again. I wish those other drawings weren't scrapped but maybe they could be put to good use for another update. I hope the next threesome is with Emma and to make it even more wild let it happen in Perry's room.

Dennis

[Short version below :D .] I skipped almost your whole post in order to not get that much spoilers, but I glimpsed at the last picture with the flow-chart. These details of your development are very interesting for me. You do not use your analogue notebook anymore for this? And you integrate sketches in a flow-chart? I would never consider this, but this might be because I cannot draw very well :D . Funny coincident that I thought about something similar to your mind getting tangled up. We players have the same "problem" - only at least for me, it is no real problem but fun and added value. I finally found the time to replay the whole game in order to enjoy the latest chapter with live memories about the previous chapters. Every time I do this, I try to come up with a playing concept for Ian and Lena. I don't want to play them out of character, Ian being horny in one chapter and prude in another for example. I also want to minimize the effect of my current state of arousal on their behaviour (letting prude Lena go with a guy just for fun). During your first chapters, I only determinated a guiding word like "prude Lena playthrough" or "honest but horny Ian". This was not very good then, but as the complexity of your game grew, they almost completely failed me. The moral options of your game are not so black and white as in GGGB. Is getting Emma dishonest, even if Perry makes no attempt to get her and even denies loving her? I then went to a guiding sentence over the respective save-page, but even this was much too few information. Especially if you want to go on with your character-sets in new chapters after a long pause. How did Ian react to Robert? Did Lena give in to Seymour on the first or second attempt? I now have a "character-script" with 30 decisions of character traits in my latest play-through up until chapter 4 and I think I will still add more to the list. But I have to emphasize that this still feels like fun and not like work. I have the possibility here to "write" my own novels to some point. Additionally, I only have to choose the "important" decisions and still can be surprised by the outcome. That feels like a good mixture of both worlds: Being able to be "creative" but do not have to work for it on a level worth mentioning. Another result of the complexity is that trying to get a special outcome (mostly a relationship with someone specific) very challenging. For example I tried to get Louise for Lena in my last 2 playthroughs. I had her before (when there were only 6(?) chapters), but now, I really have a hard time getting her again. There are so much decisions to paths that are mutually exclusive... for example: I also want to couple her with Stan, but to whom do I let her talk to when she needs to and is this decision for Stan the reason I don't get her? This is what I understand of a challenging game. But because the "unwanted" results are also hot and rewarding, it does not get frustrating. tl;dr: Your game is in a good way so complex that even we players have to keep some remarks if we want to play it in character. It also makes a challenging yet rewarding game out of it. Thank you for letting us enjoy this by making the decisions matter that much.

notmeme50

I'm excited for Lena's future. 😉

Dennis

On my second run, I put Inan and Holly together - the uninfluenced, pure Holly. The scene with Ian at Ian's was lovely! Usually, I don't like vanilla-scenes that much in games - I usuallylook for something special, something non-vanilla, may it be physical or psychological. But you wrote the scene so lovely that I have to make another post here! I liked the scene in chapter 7, but I love this one more. Why? Hard to say. Maybe her hesitation at first - maybe the "pressure" I felt after the (for a visual novel very unexpectet but very realistic) interruption of the blowjob the chapter before. Maybe because of the new music, the warm pictures. But I think a lot of it is because Holly looks absolutely beautiful! Her facial expression, her hair, her body, her luckyly not overinflated and thus for a visual novel unusual breasts that are so sexy. And they talk softly, you can feel the love for each other, but you also introduce a rising horniness that takes over. It all adds up. Maybe another aspect is because she also reminds me of my first, spanish girlfriend... it also took years until she could stay the night with me - this was hard but made the time we had even sweeter :D. Congratulations for this surprisingly great vanilla scene. You developed their sexuality and their relation even though sexually, it was a step back - no oral sex, no different positions, just fingers and sex. And Holly with open hairs is pure beauty!

Chief Solo

is anyone having issues with the game loading. Ive done several clean install but keeping getting a loading error in the trace log