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This was intended as a pilot for a story series, the feedback was so ambivalent that it is unlikely to ever get any further than this. 

Unless you guys think different.

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J.D.

I liked if. I think the reason it wasn’t too well received was because the orgy went on too long to the point of being repetitious since there are only so many places you can ejaculate and not a varied way of describing the situation. I found the premise excellent and some of the characters were quite interesting. I would enjoy seeing a second part to answer the questions that were left unanswered.

TX Rob

I enjoyed it