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Having rescued Rachel  - what now?


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Jim Crane

Thanks for releasing this chapter early. I love this series and look forward eagerly to each chapter. I especially enjoyed this particular one as you responded to your recent survey and took your readers' opinions into account. I also appreciate how Caleb is protrayed as a genuinely good guy without it being "too much" ( if you understand what I'm saying.) And I like how others in the story are seeing that and accepting it. Thanks again for good quality writing and a storyline that keeps you hooked. My only wish, like everyone else, is that the chapters came quicker lol. But I understand...

Pastmaster

Thanks for your comments Jim. I can't claim to have taken that poll into account. It was just the way the story panned out this time. There may be a time in the future that I do something different. I may also at some time in the future add an extra level of subscription where polls such as that WILL dictate the direction the story goes in but that isnt yet. The polls so far are just for fun.

Lester Pike

I have enjoyed this story very much. It is the same as reading a good book that you can't put down. I have gone through and reread every chapter, and I see new things when reading the story again.

Theswiss24

Fantastic story. Found this and read the whole thing, up to 24, in one day. Couldn’t wait for standard release schedule, hence my presence here, needless to say it was very worth it. Just wondering if you an end point for this? Or have any idea how long the story may go on?

Pastmaster

I have no idea - i;m going to keep writing until i run out of ideas. I think i will end book one as Caleb graduates - and start book 2 with his entry into the fbi acadamy

KraytRiver

Searching the Patreon here to grab all whole story and read it again, I found that this one doesn't come up when you search the site for "Caleb" likely because it doesn't say anything about it in the post, only the document name.

KraytRiver

Yep! It comes up when searching now. Thanks! Patreon is great, and I'm glad to support, but they don't have the best interface I've found.

QwartX

I noticed an error in the DOCX and PDF files, the title says "Caleb 25 - Rachel", which I assume is incorrect, cause you have file Caleb 25 - Ness shared later.

Pastmaster

this was from the time before I had to do the renumber - I thought i 'd caught them all - but appartently not sorry