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As promised this is the extra chapter for the reviews on Goodreads- I dont have that many chapters in hand any more - so I cant really do any more. I need to write more and get them through my editor - If I give more away now then illl not have any to post on my regular weekly schedule.


Thanks again for all of your support.

KR


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Matthew Smith

Another great chapter. Looking forward to down the rabbit hole, even if the mention of an end to the series is a depressing thought… I hope you don’t have plans to end the series anytime soon!

Ryan Hough

Another great chapter. I'm glad that the first experience for the girls sharing outside of the group happened but I really liked Jules reaction to how they went about it. I agree with what she said about how they acted like sluts. A sharing relationship is about trust and honesty, and in that moment how they acted wasn't very trusting.

Mulligan

Hit out of the ballpark once again! You continue to entertain and amaze.

Tasgor

Loved it, but what I really liked was the character growth. A lot of authors set up the characters and don’t want things to change.

Andrei

Yeah, the Jules reaction was right and tbh Caleb’s should have been similar if not much much stronger. This whole “need to share” mechanic is.. well, it’s a pretty obvious plot point that allows sex with new characters and isn’t well explained throughout. As far as it read, this kind of reads like abuse. Caleb being abused by the girls that is. And it was a huge turn off for me personally. All the talk about trust and whatnot and suddenly those two just hop up and leave, knowing that he’d never do something like this and knowing that he’d just forgive them for it. It’s shitty and I pretty much despise them both as characters now. Oh well