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Happy Friday Everyone.

And another little bonus - 'the maid' is a scene that I originally wrote in the chapter - but decided agianst including. 

It's not another rabbit hole - just a small distraction - read it or don't but it amused me.

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J.D.

That was so much fun to read, especially when he finally got fed up with the boys on the beach. Making them run away while pissing themselves was awesome. That bag with the golden touch was inspired which shouldn’t be surprising considering that when the twins want to play, they will always manage to find a way to make it happen. I look forward to the next chapter when Ms.Gonzales and Caleb are going to team up to do some healing and who knows what else.

Alex Ledermann

great as always. Short trial with the guys on the beach. what kind of force is CK?

Bison

Generally speaking, a flight from Paris to Barcelona would land as a domestic flight. The joys of Schengen. (For Schengen flights, your IDs are generally only checked by the airline, one does not pass airport border posts) OTOH, I never flew on private jets ;)

Pastmaster

me neither - but i would have though that someone would want to check id's since the 'airline' wouldnt as its a private flight. - in any case - lets call it artistic license :P

Tasgor

When I have flown on our company’s jet, and we went over the border from US to Canada, they brought paperwork out, we filled it out on the plane, and then went to a room in a hanger to answer questions. Nothing in the main terminal.

Tasgor

I’ve been lucky enough to do some ride alongside, but I don’t rate getting it dispatched just for me.

Jim Crane

I appreciate the relationship that is developing between Caleb and Dean. Yes, Caleb has admitted several times that he views Dean as a father, but in this chapter I can see Dean beginning to appreciate Caleb more and treating him more as an adult and an equal. I can see Dean starting to lean on Caleb more. It's a good development.

Bugsy_Builder

its not another rabbit hole, its a glory hole lol

L

Loved this chapter, i really look forward to the new chapters every week!

Uncharted Grounds

Great as always. Why didn't you want to include The Maid?

Arnim Sommer

Too sad (for Cheryl) that Dean didn't try to fit ;-)

David Long

The Maid was great. A nice interlude. Loved the action.